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JaBoyYa
2008-07-23
ch 15,
abusenice. i really liked it
Ellie201
2008-07-14
ch 1,
abuseI just found out about this story and i plan on reading it like today... but i love it! :)

Ellie XOX
Jayyyy.
2008-06-05
ch 15,
abusethis one was cute also!
Flame Rising
2008-05-23
ch 1,
abuseLet’s play a game, shall we? Yes? Fantastic.

This game is called “Things That Can Write Better Than You”. The rules are simple. Please correctly select which choice can write better than you:

A. My left testicle
B. A toilet-full of chunky diarrhea
C. An inbred midget clown who swims in choice B
D. All of the above

If you chose the correct answer, D, then you have won the following prize:

A spot in my coveted C2 “Stories A Turd Out of My ** Could Write Better” (which, strangely enough was not one of the choices). Don’t despair! Even if you didn’t choose correctly, I will be kind enough to give you that prize anyway. Who said I don’t have a heart?

Congratulations! Please continue to avoid the dictionary as if it were an oozing, puss-filled sore on an old hooker’s a.s.s. And good grammar? Well, run away from it like it’s a festering syphilitic itch you just can’t scratch in public. Or in words you can understand: your fic sucks donkey balls, and that’s what you wanted me to think, right? Because otherwise, I’d have to believe this was an actual attempt at writing and laugh the crap right out of myself.

Best regards,
F/R
il0vemuffins
2008-05-21
ch 16,
abuseAW, such a CUTE story!! :D
it was fun reading this [:
you're a great writer!
oh, and happy almost birthday!
BayleeSpiritDB
2008-05-21
ch 16,
abuseI love this story, it was so amazing! I will nominate you for the award XD
averagevballgirl8
2008-05-20
ch 16,
abuseGreat Job, I love how it ends. Nothing to drawn out, short , simple and to the point. I thought she should end up with Joe. I hope you write a sequel. I can not wait to read your new story. Please update soon.
EdwardandBella4eva8101
2008-05-20
ch 16,
abuseI think you should make a squel!
NickjonasLover2007
2008-05-20
ch 16,
abuseloved it i hope you do a sequal
jobrosluver
2008-05-20
ch 16,
abuseaw this is the end im so sad why but um awesome job and happy almost b-day
Underdog.Love
2008-05-20
ch 16,
abuseaww that was a really cute ending :) i think it was right with joe too instead of nick. good job with this story! i liked it a lot!
Dewy - 2 JBFA WINS
2008-05-20
ch 16,
abuseThis wasn't as cheesy as I thought it would be. And the slight cliche-ness didn't get to me actually. Haha.
Loved it! Aw, it's over? I liked April. You should have her cameo in your new story like Pey is in mine.
Loves!
NickjonasLover2007
2008-05-16
ch 15,
abusei can't wait for more this what i think should happen she most likely is going to break up with mike already i think it would be cute if she started going out with nick
monicaa.k.a.mieky
2008-05-16
ch 15,
abusei seriously gasped at that i wasnt expecting another girl
dun dun dun
keep going=]
monicaa.k.a.mieky
fuck.you.ff.net
2008-05-14
ch 15,
abuseYAY! mike is with another girl!
that means she can date joe/nick!
woo. :)
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