 Healer Pomfrey 2008-10-18 . chapter 1A cute story, I really liked it! |
 Audrey33 2008-09-23 . chapter 1aww thats prettycute! Poor Sev =[ |
 Athena Keating-Thomas 2008-09-23 . chapter 1Good heavens, but this was a heart-breaking fic. Well written and well characterized. Another fic for the SnapeAngst C2 Archive, and you're going into my personal favorites. I hope you keep writing! |
 firefly5151 2008-07-01 . chapter 1This was a sad story, but I really liked it. |
 excessivelyperky 2008-06-29 . chapter 1Sad, very sad. Too bad she won't hold up her end of the bargain. You don't let a friend nearly choke to death to flirt with his tormentor and then be shocked when he says something nasty--and then tell him to dump his horrible friends, but that yours are _nice_ people (never mind you know what the Marauders do, they like _you_, don't they?).
A pity that Snape needed the Junior DE squad just to make it through Hogwarts alive, and then sacrificed his life for the Gryffindors that despised him. Here's hoping he had a better afterlife.
Good story, though. |
 Captain Evermind 2008-04-21 . chapter 1Ouch! That hurts! I love it though. Very mature and elegant piece. I like the nuances of this relationship. Very nicely written. Thanks. |
 Rachel 2008-03-24 . chapter 1 Thanks for this poignant story. You captured a lot about these characters in very day to day terms. Ordinary and beautiful. Thanks for sharing this! |
 PrettySeverus 2008-03-22 . chapter 1 Thank you for the wonderful story! It is my hope that you'll do a sequel. |