Really cute, and I love your writing style. Simple but carries the point across.

Aw. That was so cute :D
I cant wait till the next ch!
:)

XD Riku's such an ass, but it's only classic.

I loved the way Wakka knew Sora right off the bat, he always seemed to be one of those guys that would know everything, just wouldn't put it to use.

... Is Sora now going to get the wrong impression of Riku? I kinda hope so, just to see Riku try and repair the 'meanie' things he did to Sora. (Like NOT know him XD)

I guess... critiquing-wise, maybe have more of Sora and Riku's thoughts (possibly more Riku) but that's the only thing I can really see... and that's not even a real thing you have to do (XD) I'm such an addict to people getting the wrong impression about Riku. Update soon, okay?

Very, very cute! Can't wait to see (read) more, please update again soon!

Aww. This is very cute.

They seem slightly OOC, but thats ok, because their still cute!

I would like to see moar!
-Jazu
:D