Reviews for Reconciliation in the Never After

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Elainhe 2008-03-31 ch 3,	abuseExcellent! Funny, sad, intense, action packed. You wrote the actiond brilliantly. I don't know what more to say. I loved it! "“Yes, a worthy goal indeed, but did he perchance to say with whom?”" This made me laugh - so Danny, to rush in - when it suits him - without having all the facts. :) Great work.
Elainhe 2008-03-31 ch 2,	abuseAnd you didn't disappoint! A completely unexpected twist with Aiden and Louie. I really enjoyed how you had written both of them and loved their conversation with Danny - humor amidst the darkness. That is skill!! Don and Lindsay were spot on too, playing on her past with this. But, I have to move on. :)
Elainhe 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseExcellent, strong, hard writing. I love it; it really brings the essence (and the emotions) into sharp focus. Loved the end lines, and this: "Not only looking but challenging, “I’m looking. What do you want to show me?”" Perfect exchange there. You paint his guilt and anger and her reaction so well. The writing style really suits what you are doing here. Now I have to see where you went with it. ;)
Bluenose 2008-03-11 ch 3,	abuseGood chapter, really enjoyed the story. Liked Danny's response when he came round, I can almost picture the EMT's face! Good job!
peanut2lb 2008-03-10 ch 3,	abuseSqueals I love the supernatural feel with Aiden and Louie but then I said that before. Loved Aiden's attitude and not messing with the time continum. I hope Danny will be able to come to terms with his guilt and move on. Loved Lindsay giving the CPR. Again beautifully written, the sense of imagery really spills over into who is speaking w/o having to do into detail.
lily moonlight 2008-03-08 ch 3,	abuseThis was a wonderful ending, very powerful. The bicyle bell was a potent image, and I liked how you wrote the scene between Louie and Aiden. Great story, and I'm glad there was a happy ending and the chance of redemption for Danny.
Shelbers 2008-03-08 ch 3,	abuseAw, awesome conclusion! Hehe, love how Danny would get the psych eval, if it weren't for Lindsay and Don. Great job!
JESSMARY25 2008-03-08 ch 3,	abuseBeautifully done! I can see why Danny has that strong desire to see Ruben and make things right that he would risk his love ones. I'm glad he didn't give up his life 'cause it's clear he had much more to do in earth among the living. Another great fic. Sad to see it end. I hope we see more from you. :)
EmpireClover 2008-03-08 ch 3,	abuseThis was fantastic! Shame to see the end, but everything has to end! Briliant writing style, again! ;) I just love your writing; descriptions, speech, everything! I love the interaction between Aiden and Louie, Brill! Danny having to decide, heartbreaking, but pure excellence. Lovely fic, well done.
prplerayne 2008-03-08 ch 3,	abuseThis was absolutely fantastic! You managed to make me laugh and cry all in the same chapter! I laughed at the dynamic Aiden and Louie have here. So funny! And I cried when Danny realized he couldn't make amends to Ruben without being in the hereafter for eternity. And then I laughed again at his perceived delieriousness and cried happy tears that he was going to be okay in the long run and so would Lindsay and Don.
marialisa 2008-03-08 ch 3,	abuseI love the opening - setting up Danny's realisation that it is Ruben's bike bell that he can hear. The interplay between Louie and Aiden is wonderful - the two people aside from Flack and Lindsay who have a chance of making Danny finally realise he's been an **! This has been a wonderful read - powerful emotion expressed in writing almost poetic in its cadence. Beautiful.
peanut2lb 2008-03-07 ch 2,	abuseFirst I love the spiritual angle with Aiden and Louie. But this line: This is bulleting through a concrete labyrinth, neon signs blurring beyond recognition, eyes slitting closed from needle sharp rain driven by a relentless wall of wind, arms wound tightly around the waist of a grief stricken and guilt ridden man with a signed death warrant in his hands, a signed death warrant possibly for both of them. And in this moment all she can do is hang on and pray. Pray that his emotions will play out before the wheels slide out from underneath them, pavement scouring away their skin as easily as the meat falls from the bone of a stewed, Sunday dinner chicken, impact cracking skull and splintering bone like a stick man at the mercy of a wrecking ball. Is the heart of the entire piece. It really pulls together Danny's anguish and perfectly describes out of control at the it's best. I eagerly await chapter 3
Bluenose 2008-03-06 ch 2,	abuseExcellent second chapter. I'm intrigued by the bike bell and what it represents. I like how something so innocent and childlike can be made to be so...ominious.
chili-peppers 2008-03-05 ch 2,	abuseOh wow! This is fantastic!! What i've read so far, i absolutly love! Amazing writing. Im really really looking forward to more XD
ncisabbylover 2008-03-05 ch 2,	abuseinteresting great work can't wait for more love abbylover

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