Reviews for Once Upon a Time

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redrider6612 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abuseAw, that was just awesome! Really lovely glimpse of their friendship and a promise of a bit more. I'm curious why she asked him to stay--aside from the obvious "OMG how could she let him leave!" reaction--maybe you could do a second chap and touch on that, maybe a morning after scene? As a writer myself, I totally understand if you aren't inspired, it's just a thought. Anyway, jerseybones told me reading your fics would pull me out of my funk. This one made some inroads, but I think I need to read some more. :)
irony882 2008-05-18 ch 1,	abuseJust because a story doesn't have a great amount of romanctic gestures doesn't mean that the subtle ones can't be as effective...congrats on this powerful yet sweet story!
MatildaLee 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abuseI love it. I love the mentions of the beer and the Wasbi peas, and how Brennan was expecting him when he arrived. I loved how you had them sleep together--literally, not metaphorically. The ending was perfect: beautiful and simply stated. Matilda
Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseGreat story! I really liked the way that happened! Very them! I really enjoyed this story!
siapom 2008-04-11 ch 1,	abuseThis has to be one of the sweetest stories I've ever read! It's...perfect. It really is. :)
kitotterkat 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseI really like this. It's very simple, but it establishes a lot of familiarity . . . like it was just natural for them to fall in love; there was no other option. =]
Habita 2008-03-22 ch 1,	abuseI LOVED these little moments! When I read your fic, I just smiled and thought that it could happen in the show like this and I would love it all the way. Because I´m sure there has to be a moment when both of them just knew it. And there´s no need to make it a big deal. It could happen just like this. Sweet, natural and perfect. So thanks a lot for another wonderful possibility to wish for! It was gorgeous :-) Favs: The beginning. All the beginning is amazing! I love how you describe the way they get used to each other´s tastes and preferences. I found it so sweet that she has his beer and his dvds and he has her snacks! :-) I´m sorry I don´t know how to explain myself better, but I completely love the idea. "She answered the door on the first knock, almost like she'd been waiting for him." I LOVED it! They started making space for material things, and now she fits him in her friday night, and it seems as natural as she having his beer in her fridge. I´m so sorry! I had to go to WordReference in order to find the words and I´m not sure they make any sense! I hope you understand! I´m feeling very frustrated here! lol. "Are you expecting company?", "Only you" melts "...he ignored the pain and reached out a hand to brush her hair from her forehead." The two of them waking up in her couch is one of the sweetest scenes I have read. Tender and beautiful, I loved it! :-) "If I asked you to stay tonight, would you?" LOVE IT! TOTALLY LOVE IT! Their dialogue is perfect. In my opinion, you used just the right words to make them say everything. Every single word is powerful and it just... happens. It´s really amazing, Lerdo :-) "...her eyebrows drawn together in a frown his fingers itched to smooth away." LOVE it! Then, when they are laying in her bed, is so perfect that I honestly don´t know what to say. It´s beautiful, and sweet, and natural. Like you said, "a kiss could wait". The moment is complete the way it is. I love it :-) Thanks a lot for sharing :-)
GGjunkie33 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseAww! Very sweet & cute! Love the simplicity of it! :)
squeekie23 2008-03-06 ch 1,	abuseI keep coming back to this little gem. I love your treatment of the characters. I'll echo other reviewers and say that this is really how I see them getting together. Great story.
LocoGreggo 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseI liked that lil' oneshot. I think it was quite cute. Could be added onto later...but it's like left to the immagination. Sorta like the old disney movies before they started messing with the classics.
DaLiza 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseVery cute!
bb-4ever 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abusegreat shot. how things just progressed nicely. it would be great if you moved it on further wonder how easily they could move in together - probably just a gently as spending the night together. well done enjoyed
Sarali1983 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseIt's cute, it really is! !
Riley's Angel 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseI read this earlier this morning, before I went to work, but I didn't have time to review then. I'm glad I didn't because I have to tell you that this stayed on my mind all day! Lately, after rewatching some of the season 3 eps, I've really started to think this is how they'll end up on the show. I'm not sure it's going to be some crazy dramatic event; I think it'll just happen, and you captured that so perfectly. I loved loved loved when she asked him what he'd say if she asked him to stay. It was so beautiful, and I really hope that the show can make it as great as you did. Seriously, awesome fic!
fanofbones 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseI've discovered that "little fanfare" is quiet romantic and sexy...and just aw this was perfect for a rainy evening... fab

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