 KevinInScotland 2009-09-22 . chapter 10Isn't that lovely - if only one day only the Cameron types were built (plus their male equals of course), who knows.
Perhaps they could protect us all.
More seriously, very touching stories. |
 KevinInScotland 2009-09-22 . chapter 9This time in their lives is what most people remember most about their lives. |
 KevinInScotland 2009-09-22 . chapter 8A very in-depth analysis of how AIs might be programmed. They are learning computers and to make a cute one that learns like a girl would certainly appeal to John, as she is also a fountain of information too.
The phrase "I need her" is definitely true.
Good story. |
 KevinInScotland 2009-09-22 . chapter 7Very good. I would be interested to know if these types of processes are all background and out of Cameron's consciousness in the same way that our heart beats without our help.
What I am seeing is a girl of approx 4 years of age in Cameron, coupled with her other much more advanced attributes.
You're going to hate me for saying this but affective should be effective in the story.
So basically, this is great and different from the usual boring everyday stories that we see. |
 KevinInScotland 2009-09-18 . chapter 6I have read a lot of Jameron fanfics and I am quite intrigued to learn new words used in America.
The latest one is cotton candy - we call it candy floss in England.
Jello,... what the hell is jello I first thought, then I realised it was jelly - I learnt that from watching Cheerleader Nation which was darn impressive - there is almost nothing like that here and most people in England still think cheerleaders stand by the sidelines and wave pom-poms which makes then appear to be slightly divvy but now I know differently and I am impressed. (I am digressing here but I think I would like to grow up in America if I had my life again, they are not so boring).
Anyway, this chapter made me laugh and it was good. I like Riley too - why can't girls learn to share? Shame on your all. |
 KevinInScotland 2009-09-18 . chapter 5Let's face it, he does need her.
After all, how many guys wish they could be sitting in a classroom and be attacked by a big scary robot and then rescued by an angel from above? |
 KevinInScotland 2009-09-18 . chapter 4I don't understand this chapter - who shot Cameron? Presumably it was Cromartie & if so, where did he go and why? |
 KevinInScotland 2009-09-18 . chapter 3Good stuff, it must be very difficult for a learning computer to work all this out, when I can't !
It is a terrible shame than fanfic does not have colouring for their words... each time Cameron speaks the para could be dark pink & Sarah light pink, conversely John could be dark blue and Derek could be light blue. Would make things a lot easier !
OK, on to next chapter now Beckii (My daughter's name). |
 KevinInScotland 2009-09-18 . chapter 2Hopefully I will find out what song the words belong to.
I also hope that Morris stays safe, I would hate for him to come to harm just because he has the 'hots' for Cameron Philips.
Good story and I look forward to the next chapter (let's home Sarah also find some happeniness in this A/U. |
 KevinInScotland 2009-09-18 . chapter 1This is a variation to the story, I look forward to the next chapter. |
 mosherguy18 2009-07-07 . chapter 11Amazing story hope you update soon. |
 TK-MR 2009-06-28 . chapter 11 Nice work.
I'm yelling! The watch would not went through time, be cause if it did, so did Cam's body, the body has more 'flesh' than the watch so to speak. lol sometime bent rules can be accept, but sometime, it woud make "WTF? No F*c**ng way." lol |
 TK-MR 2009-06-28 . chapter 9 *John was rubbing furiously at the small piece of software in his hands* no one nothing can hold 'software' only 'hardware' is holdable. |
 TK-MR 2009-06-28 . chapter 6 *Cameron ran down the stairs and shoved her face inches from Riley’s.
“I am NOT a freak.”*
LMAO
Drabble 15 should swap with Drabble 14. |
 poly 2009-06-28 . chapter 11 True... Cromartie's metallic skull went through in the pilot episode, after all. |