At first, it kinda upset me that poor Diedara was being so mistreated, only to have Sasori getting thrown into the abused mix as well...but...after reading the whole thing... It's been on my mind all day and it makes me fidget. I liked it, maybe a little to much, so it's now on my favorite list. Konan puts me in mind of a friend of mine >.< I could see her playing that part like a pro...though...I don't think she smokes. ^^

~ Oce ~

This part was my favorite so far. Poor Dei baby, he needed some kind of peace that would make him happy after all the pass hell and the hell that's yet to come.

Poor Deidara baby D: Makes me wanna help him ._.

It kinda makes me wish that was my character in Dei's place...don't ask why ><

lol, haven't read your fic yet, but just a comment on the PMS thing :) it now officially stands for 3 things:
1) pre menstrual syndrome
2) pimp my sculptor
3) puppet master sasori
lol :)

YOU SICK FUCKER!

Take me as your apprentice,I love your demented ways!You are my IDOL...*sound of sirens* Shit,the cops r here to take me to the white bouncy room!You'll never take me alive PO-POs!

oh,great story by the way!

HAHA. Sasori seems so sweet! ><
Cute. But DEIDARA IS BEING TORTURED! haha.

AH...
POOR DEI!!
HE'S GETTING RAPED OVER AND OVER AGAIN!
Wow.. I actually feel sorry for him...
HEHE.

Love the story! The fluff between Sasori and Deidara trying desperately to even out the rape... It's great, kinda sad. There are going to be more chapters, right?

the power raping to dei was mean yet oddly enjoyable next chapter you should have dei and sasori take revenge on all the akatsuki members

-twitch twitch-
wow.i swear to jashin i have problems with my weird fetishes and whatnot xD

UPDATE GOSH DERNIT!! >D

AIE! I LOVE THIS PAIRING! Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!

oh my god i feel so bad for deidara...DIE ALL OTHER PEOPLES THAT HURT DEIDEI!

i should be disturbed and disgusted...but instead i find myself eagerly awaiting an update! such is my crazy mind, i LOVE this story!

Ahh... As I think I've said before, this is my favorite of all the other fan fictions I've read involving Deidara and rape.

I think I really am a sick fuck.

And, at the same time, it's very inspiring. Right now I've no idea what to write, except to finish the other fan fictions I've started. But that's not really important - what I'm saying is I really enjoy your work. It's difficult to find someone who writes as well as you do.

Keep up the good work.

You know, there's been so many signs of the Apocalypse I don't think it's coming anymore. This story is one of those that you can't stop reading no matter how twisted or scary it gets. I love it.