lol, haven't read your fic yet, but just a comment on the PMS thing :) it now officially stands for 3 things:
1) pre menstrual syndrome
2) pimp my sculptor
3) puppet master sasori
lol :)

YOU SICK FUCKER!

Take me as your apprentice,I love your demented ways!You are my IDOL...*sound of sirens* Shit,the cops r here to take me to the white bouncy room!You'll never take me alive PO-POs!

oh,great story by the way!

HAHA. Sasori seems so sweet! ><
Cute. But DEIDARA IS BEING TORTURED! haha.

AH...
POOR DEI!!
HE'S GETTING RAPED OVER AND OVER AGAIN!
Wow.. I actually feel sorry for him...
HEHE.

Love the story! The fluff between Sasori and Deidara trying desperately to even out the rape... It's great, kinda sad. There are going to be more chapters, right?

the power raping to dei was mean yet oddly enjoyable next chapter you should have dei and sasori take revenge on all the akatsuki members

-twitch twitch-
wow.i swear to jashin i have problems with my weird fetishes and whatnot xD

UPDATE GOSH DERNIT!! >D

AIE! I LOVE THIS PAIRING! Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!

oh my god i feel so bad for deidara...DIE ALL OTHER PEOPLES THAT HURT DEIDEI!

i should be disturbed and disgusted...but instead i find myself eagerly awaiting an update! such is my crazy mind, i LOVE this story!

Ahh... As I think I've said before, this is my favorite of all the other fan fictions I've read involving Deidara and rape.

I think I really am a sick fuck.

And, at the same time, it's very inspiring. Right now I've no idea what to write, except to finish the other fan fictions I've started. But that's not really important - what I'm saying is I really enjoy your work. It's difficult to find someone who writes as well as you do.

Keep up the good work.

You know, there's been so many signs of the Apocalypse I don't think it's coming anymore. This story is one of those that you can't stop reading no matter how twisted or scary it gets. I love it.

that...was...terrifying...konan's SCARY!! -hides in corner-

Okay i have to say i was held with bated breath when you wrote
then moved away to unfasten her cloak. Deidara’s visible blue eye widened as he saw that instead of pants.

I almost freaked for a minute thinking she was going to be a hermaphodite (sp?) then started laughing thinking of her with a strap on. LMAO

another great but sore story for sweet dei and even poor Sasori-kun.

Daydrifter i am totally frightened with the new knowledge your story was exactly 6 words. Total sign of the Apocalypse since today i realizied the song on radio i thought sounded good was actual sung by Britney Spears. (no bashing but so not my music style shivers)the song was so good (breaking the ice) i was shocked and called to my son and actually freaked it it was a sign of Apocalypse and then i see your new chapt LOL

I think we are all doomed grab all the Pledge you can muwahhah


seriously another great chapt!!
poor poor Dei you almost want to go and beat up Itachi ... i said almost LOL


Looking forward to the next chapt and hope your summer is going well!!
Moonwitchy