I like this ending better than the manga, it had come to an end far too quickly than I would have liked.

Aw. Sometimes, when one is on the winning side, it's so easy to forget how it must feel for the side that lost. The failure and the terrible disappointment.

*huggles Rikkai*

Very endearing and touching... I have a feeling that this would be what Rikkai would feel in real life. Great work!

-Crys

Good job describing their regrets adn feelings from all POVs! I believe that is how Rikkaidai reacted. I started to feel sorry for them. I wonder if Captain Yukimura would have been the one to slap his teammates for losing if he hadn't been hospitalized. Maybe after he lost to Echizen, he also asked all his teammates to slap him, but they refused.

Excellent.

The resolution is very good.

Good job. :)

So beautiful T_T definitely something scene worthy that Konomi-sensei failed to cover.

~M

Gwyn-chan...^^,
That's so cute...^.^

A TENDER STORY it is.

LUV IT!

Wow... I saw it coming that Yukimura would lose in that match (even if it was his first and only match in the entire series T_T). This is a nice reflection piece about the after math. Well written and put together though I would've liked to see a little more of the other Rikkai team. Anyways, good job~

Wow... so touching; i love it! I agree--the ending was kind nyeeaah for me... he could have easily extended it another volume and added more fun chapters or at least reflection chapters - though, the lack of some information may help in the world

Wow...A bit angsty for my liking. But still very sweet at the end. Yay! Ryoma won...which meant Tezuka won! Hehehehehe... What happens to others - I don't care. My precious Tezuka... (Falls down clutching bloody stomach. Stare into the eyes of a crazy fangirl)