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| The Archaic Minister 2008-09-26 ch 1,  | abuseTails must have Klinefelter Syndrome (small dick/shemale syndrome). And this kicked ass, you. |
| Jeora 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseThis was really fun. Fuck typos, you got it good. ;D |
| King Hadbar 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuse"He considers boredom an Art." Yeah, Pulp is awesome. And this was great as well. |
| Dr Namgge 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseBit foul on the language for my normal liking, but this works. Nack seems to come off as an arrogant stuck up unlikeable jerk, and for him it works perfectly. This wouldn't be a story I'd stick with normally yet I still read it from start to finish. Sign of a good writer, be proud of this. |
| Taranea 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuse(huge grin) ...I want more. I think this is one of my favs on your work - more story, more sense, yet still your style, y'know? Anyway, loved the thing with the Tails is actually a girl rumour...and you write nack wonderfully IC. Would like to see him again, nice work.^^ |
| Maverick87 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseGood job on getting this up. Smooth, flowing, and plenty of dark comedy. Tails being called a girl the entire time was pretty funny. And using the Gary Stu-Mary Sue names was a nice touch as well. |
| Sara 2008-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWould you not use the retarded word so carelessly. I've been called retarded and is a mean insult I don't let it bother me anymore.The word retarded is used in a retarded way around in junior high when people don't know what it means or what theyre saying.. Retarded like bitch is way overused like the word epedemic. Retarded is a technical word meaning not being able to do tasks that are easier to us then to them.It's the way their made. Like I may be so slower in things but I'm not doing it to irriate someone on purpose. The story is fine but please be aware what the word retarded really means and only use it if someone is really retarded who has no mental skill beyond a child. Useing it as a doctor term. Because retarded is a desription word of a type of person like the word african amercian is. |