DANG, GIRL! HURRY!

wow! i'm in suspense! great chapter!

...i will never watch hey arnold the same way again...

Eeeeee! I hate cliff-hangers full of suspense like that! At least the next parts are already up, so I don't have to worry... THIS time... lol. I thought Arnold's point of view was great so far, very realistic & believable.

You're gonna kill me with the suspence!

NNNNNNNNNNNN! This one was even better! HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE! The suspense is great! You gotta finish this one . . .

! HOW COULD YOU ? HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE? ARGH! YOU MUST WRITE MORE QUICKLY! I was litterally on the edge of my seat. You shoul dput this into chatering tho, just so no one bring it against you and gets the story removed. I WANT MORE.

Noo! Please continue, this is very good.

OMG! That was really dramatic. I can't take such suspense but I like it! Please continue! I'm begging! *on knees* Its so great. I really hope helga doesn't die. Hero's shouldn't die and neither should love. Good luck and keep in touch!

Sincerely,

Roxy

plez continueing. your story might be sad but it's rock!

This is a great story! Great use of suspense! Please put up more soon!

Oh, yeah, sure, leave it with a cliffhanger! Just great! Well, add Part 3 soon! This is going really good(or, well, bad as the cirumstances are...). Please continue!

I HATE YOU! DAMN I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! HOW DARE YOU GIVE ME A TASTE OF MY OWN MEDICINE! GRRRR...:::Ahem::: Okay, I'm composed now. This story kicks-ass. I must read more or I will be liable to throw myself off something high. So I had better see a part three up here soon, got that, chiuqitita? Good. Now, I will go off and grumble and pace until I see the next part to this piece of art :::Walks off grumbling inaubible mumbles which are probably not-very-nice:::

You really really have to continue! The story is sooo soo good! Please continue very very soon!

Aaarg! Dang you! Heheh, what razor suspense you have. I love it!