this is so hot! one of my favorite j/b lemons ever

that was incredibly HOT!! =D loved it!

Cute!!

Okay, you've done it- I now want Jacob.

LOVED IT! Can't wait for more!!

wow
i love this great story cant wait to see what is to come

GAH!! omg!! you need to finish this story!
no excuses no questions FINISH IT!! this is the best bella/jacob story i've read ever!
FINISH IT!!

um yeah wow.

wow! that was good! i thought they were really good together! well done!! keep writing!!

Liz
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Awesome! that's all i can really say. it was a great read

SEXY ... I need to find me a Jacob of my own .. damn :)
I don't think I'll ever be able to look at another man with out compairing them to Jacob in my head .. Great story .. I could go for another chapter !

oh wow. that was amazingly intense! whew. i've gotta calm down there.
ahem..update soon plez!

damn... this gave me a craving for hotdogs...
you should write more!

That was... wow. Great job!

Awesome!