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| e-ellens 2008-07-29 ch 16,  | abuseI must say that i absolutely love the story so far. But... in saying that, i have to admit the whole Don Lamb thing makes me sick. Almost (minutely) literally. I cant wait for the next update!! e-ellens |
| jacedes 2008-07-22 ch 16, | abuseI'm glad that you gave us the backstories on everyone. I'm still sad that Veronica and Logan couldn't make it work, but at least they both ended up with great kids. I just really want them to end up together :) |
| blairbear014 2008-07-21 ch 16, | abuseWait! Can't it still be Logan's, I mean...the way you wrote it- Veronica and Lamb slept together not long after her&Logan broke up, so I think she should get a paternity test just in case. Because I really want it to be Logan. Even if he did get a drunk slut pregnant. |
| Mallikad 2008-07-21 ch 16, | abuseOh, I liked it, and as much as I adore beta-ing, I'm glad you didn't send me Logan and Veronica's parts because I LoVed reading them here.. xD Update soon!! xD Message me the new chapter soon... |
| I.-heart-.Logan 2008-07-21 ch 16, | abuseOk WOW... I wasnt expecting that... but then again i kinda was... Very well written! I Love the MaDi interaction Update soon |
| Brittney 2008-07-20 ch 16, anon. | abusei can't even begin to say how excited i was to see this updated! of course i was still hoping that Lila was somehow Logan's haha oh well :( this chapter was amazing! update soon!! i can't wait to see what will happen now that Veronica told her but i am hoping for some LoVe soon!! |
| xGracex 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI just found this fic today & spent part of the night up reading it! It's really exciting to read... I love the relationships between the kids of the new generation. Your writting is so awesome - this story could be used as a spin-off of the series (not like thats ever going to happen, but we can dream, right?) I love that Gia & Leo are married...so perfect! And I`m also glad that Lila isn`t Logan`s, cause that would have been way too predictable! Can`t wait for Lamb`s reaction to the fact that he`s a father... to a sixteen year-old girl lol. If you havent already chosen already, JD should be Lila`s love interest. Obviously Alex & her are going to step-siblings sooner or later lol. |
| Jenn6891 2008-07-19 ch 16, | abuseyou are a goddess!! i simply love, love, love this chapter. the background info. on everyone was amazing. can i just say WOW! everybodies had interesting lives. love lila's reaction to the news. update soon please. |
| GlitterFairyPrincess 2008-07-19 ch 16, | abusethat makes me feel a little better...because the whole lamb/veronica thing makes my skin crawl...this is pretty much the best scenario in my head. but still...ew. on the bright side, wow. this chapter is intense and massive and great. worth the wait, but i hope the next one comes faster. (= |
| IluvVM 2008-07-19 ch 16, anon. | abuseomg so glad you are back with an update the longest one i think i've ever read lol but i loved it my little opinion i think LOgan overreacted whne he broke up with Veronica the last time thats it the rest i love:) cant wiat for an update |
| Sophie 2008-07-19 ch 16, anon. | abusewow, that was good! though i did have a hard time with the second person, but that's just cause i'm not used to it i guess. but in the middle, you switched back to first person for a second there, so you might wanna check that out. fabulously done, update soon please! i'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter! |
| kathi-ryn 2008-07-19 ch 16, | abuseThat chapter was great! I can't wait for more. I would love to see Lila/Lamb interaction. |
| Poisoned Princess 2008-07-19 ch 16, | abuseAwesome chapter, but there is one problem. You pretty much can't get a paternity test done until after the baby is born. So Sophie probably wouldn't have known by then that the baby was Dick's. Also... holy crap, that was probably the longest chapter I've ever read. Well done. I also think it's kinda funny how both Logan and Dick accidentally get a girl pregnant and decide to 'do the honorable thing'. I also really LOVE that Veronica and Logan just happen to be in the same hospital at the same time. Umm...except the second part from Veronica's point of view is messed up. It switches from 'you' to 'I', again. But the 'Veronica has a little Lamb' part makes me laugh. It's hilarious. And of course I hope you update this soon! I thought this fic was over with the last chapter, but I'm glad it's not. -Princess- |
| Nichole 2008-07-19 ch 16, anon. | abuseI love this story and was glad to see an update. I loved seeing the back story on Dick and Logan. Although I am not liking that Lamb is her father I can't wait for the next update. Hopefully it will include Lila's reaction and maybe some LoVe. |
| Maiqu 2008-07-19 ch 16, | abuseloved it!! |