I hope that someday you decide to continue this, because the premise is intriguing and you write well. Subscribing just in case ;)

What a great idea for this a fic! Really, it is very interesting with how this chapter opened up with everything around Guy and also Luke's response to the situation.

Though you could use a little improvement on some story aspects. Of course, it would be somewhat senseless to list them here, so a small bit of advice would be just to re-read your story and scrutinize the piece for any errors like one letter misspellings, captilisation, etc.

This is a great idea. I've always wondered what would happen if Guy joined Van's side. Luke seems a little childish in the chapter, but he's almost always like that. Guy seems a little OOC, but that's part of what makes it so interesting. I hope to see another update soon.

This is an interesting fanfic. An interesting plot twist. I say keep it up.