Reviews for Once Upon A Time

Reviews For: Once Upon A Time

AshwolfX 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuseSo glad that you have decided to do a sequel on a storyline that I really enjoyed. Thanks and I look forward to the next chapter. = )
Koolchamp 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseThat was a brilliant end to the chapter. Pure brilliance. An awsome start to the story. Well written. Very engrosing. Very fun and entertaining to read. I like the interaction between Ami and Makoto. I also like the background story of how they both ended up in this strange new world. I can't wait to see how this story progresses. Once again your off to a awsome start. Keep it up. I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter. Take care. Cheers!
Just Another Fan 2008-03-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt's been a while since I reviewed anything, and I've completely forgotten my penname and password. Ah well. This is awesome! I really liked Ever After, and I've always hoped that Corvus would write a follow up to it - but I'm almost happier that you did! I've read most of your writing, and I really like it. It's nice to see someone who can write Ami/Makoto without relying on bad stereotypes (though you were sort of mean in Entre Nuos). I look forward to seeing where you take this - it's an interesting world set-up, with a lot of possibilities. But then, you didn't need me to tell you that. Respectfully yours, Just Another Fan
Volchise 2008-03-11 ch 1,	abuseAwesome!! Completely and totally awesome. Can't WAIT for the next chapter.
Neuroleptic 2008-03-06 ch 1,	abuseI suppose people are ignoring this like the plauge because it's an alternate reality story. That being said, after finaly finding time to read it I thought, 'why in the world hasn't anyone reviewed this yet?' The part where Makoto sends the electricity back at her attacker was great, by the way. So, how far are you into writing the next chapter?

Return to Top