 MadameVicturnien 2008-04-11 . chapter 1Bad News:
1. I don't understand what's so funny about this. There's no point and there's just- nothing funny. Fluffy pink bunnies? Might have been funny when I was in 3rd grade, but here it's just immature.
2. Script format = no-no
3. Javert is so OOC and anything semi-accurate is stupidly enlarged till it's no longer in character either.
-Mme Victurnien |
 Cinekimi 2008-03-15 . chapter 1Hah! That was kinda random. |
 Ryo Kazunine 2008-03-09 . chapter 1Very good for the length. |
 Sythar 2008-03-06 . chapter 1I'd agree with PhantomInspector that the musical line is a bit dangerous in these waters. We're just a little wary of song lines popping up in fics.
It was mildly amusing... nice concept. As has been said, it might be a thought to flesh it out a bit more.
... as a Javert fan, I am not going to comment on the information presented here by the VO. :D |
 LesMiserablesEponine 2008-03-05 . chapter 1LOL! thats funny! Its like the one thing they did on the Amanda show! You know the ones With Amanda Bynes??!! |
 PhantomInspector 2008-03-04 . chapter 1Okay . . . *ahem* First of all, you should be warned that the Fanfiction Police will probably yell at you for having this in script-type format, so . . . watch out.
This was . . . mildly amusing. I think in future fics, you should definitely flesh things out (which will be easier without the script format). And that part where you took lines from the musical was a wee bit cliche. That's especially risky in this category where musical-based fics are regarded with apprehension.
The "Know Your Stars" pun was pretty funny, though. Okay, I'm done. See ya. |
 biawutnow 2008-03-04 . chapter 1lol...wth? My favorite character from Les Mis was Javert...props to you for making a fic like this. I seriosuly doubt Javert liked fluffy pink bunnies XD
Good job |