This is so interesting! I love the twins, but what happens next! I think there should be more on the Amber/Hex thing, its funny and sweet.

sorry that this isn't a real review and all but im not sure what the fic was about cuz i don't no anything about alpha force
just wanted to say thanks for adding my cassy fic to ur list thing
i would like a beta, you'd have to help me with figuring it out though, cuz im not sure how to do that
my email is amazing.
also, i have another cassy fic if u ever want to read it

oh it's exciting! Really good, can't wait to find out what happens!
Elle xx

Yay! The parents are there! Li's twin brothers were really funny! I'm glad everything worked out okay.

Really nice!! Loved this!!

RAPIDS?! AH! Things just go from bad to worse. Hope they'll all make it. Felt sorry for Alex and Li; imagine waking up to what they did. Update soon!

Well things just go from bad to worse don't they? I'm very glad they survived the crash but this is going to have a happy ending right?

AH! ANOUGHER CLIFF HANGER!!
I don't think they could swim that well with two unconsious people, I had to swim with my brother like that in the sea and it was diffecult, then again I'm not such a great swimmer :P

Hope they're ok

Good chapter... v.funny. love how u put mini eggs and rockstar into one chapter (2 things i adore!!) lol.. hope you UD soon (and oh yeah Alpha Force survive)

HaHa. That was hilerious... MINI EGGS!... *drools*

OH!! I just relised that it was cause its easter u put mini-eggs. I'm really slow some times. :P

Will they live... nobody noes except you of course

Oh no the cliff! That was a really random chapter but it somehow suits Li. There's a cliff in the cliffie, that sounds weird.

One question; were you on a sugar high when you wrote this? Good chapter though, with or without the aid of sugar. Know exactly how Li feels after eating the chocolate; me and one of my friends were utterly hyper today. I blame two of my friends who gave us choccie. Anyway, good chapter, though I've already typed that, and can't wait for an update!

Poor Li. All she wants to do is fall asleep. What's awaiting around the corner? Da da da...

HaHa its hilerious that Li keeps falling asleep its like "lalalala *does a backflip* ... *sits down* z"

Lol “I’m dying. Oh, god.” I laughed so hard at that cause I thought she was mucking around then I read that she was cry and I was like whopes...

UD soon plz

Another really good chapter... hope you UD soon