wow! it's getting way more interesting.
I LOVE that song!

Wow. Update soon.

It's good, but are you double spacing? It's easier to read if you double space.

nice chapter...looking forward to the next chapter

ok you know what, i am writing constructive criticsm... this story is well... not good, and not choking horible. WHAT THE HELL IS UP WITH ALL THE DETAILES. I MEAN HELLO, ITS JUST A TOWEL GET OVER IT! BEING DETAILED DOES NOT ALWAYS BOTHER PEOPLE, BUT IT DOES WHEN YOU DESCRIBE SOMETHING POINTLESS LIKE A TOWEL! WHEN YOU DESCRIBE HOW A PERSON LOOKS DETAILS ARE AWESOME, BUT THE WAY YOU USE DETAILS, WELL IT SUCKS! AND BESIDES I HATE STORIES WITH TENTEN AS THE MAIN CHARACTER!

P.S- THIS REVIEW IS NOT MEANT FOR REBECCA, THE AUTHOR OF SPIRIT NINJA. SHE JUST LET ONE OF HER FRIENDS WRITE A STORY ON HER ACOUNT SO THIS REVIEW IS FOR THAT FRIEND. cough*cadiz*cough (thats the friends name)

It's good, cant wait till you (or your friend) updates!

Nice :) Kinda confused cause I've only seen that one chapter of Naruto, but good none the less! :-D
~Twilight AND Edward Cullen LOVER~ ha

interesting, looking forward to the next chapter

OMg! i luv it! hurry up and write more! I think u should make ur next ch. longer! But.. I LOVE IT!