finish reading last sentance words that ran through my mind "Scarlet that bitch" lol i love how this story is going i love\hate the drama lol its hard to explain but its more love the. hate

It would probably be the last you'll be hearing from me.

Overall your story is savage, but the end... was what everyone needed - and i am talking everyone, even yr characters.

Good read! I think you're mental in what you did to yr characters, but it makes it somehow, oddly and psychopathically... nice at the end. Not better, but nice.

I was to state, when thinking of your story in retrospect.

one - you had the preg months mixed up. Check it back - when tifa was in her maternity dress with the scarf under her bosom, you counted it as her last. But then somewhere lower you said it was her eight.

two - pregnant women can not eat a single thing when they're in labour, not water, chips or chocolate.

three - amnesia is temporary. as in a few minutes to hours and rare cases days, never months.

Okay, think i cleared that up.

I am honestly in a very sensitive position. I dont know if i hate you or just dont seriously like you. But you are absolutely, mass terrible to these characters.

You're completely mental with screwing these characters lives.

sighs...

I swear you must get bored very quickly.

Your flamers couldn't all be wrong if they saw something. Its one thing to write your characters in a certain way and treat them another.

I hope you never get the wrong impression about me, but you probably did, its just... some parts of the story dont add. Zack does not have to be wrong for feeling the way he did an Tifa should be such a douche either for hiding it. You make her so frail and give up on the most important thing - zack, but not on the weird and hurtful ppl like cloud and aerith.

Would you do that to your own boyfriend? Make him wait for the news and give up so easily yourself

I always read the story with need to be thrilled and you thrill me, but i always have a point of view to add.

I absolutely saw nothing wrong with what Zack did, and now i'm wondering if its the way it was wrote that i didn't get it.

To me Tifa runs around forgiving rocks with that compassionate temper of hers. Forgives her ex, forgives her friend but doesn't forgive zack.

Girl you're damn wrong to write zack as IF he were wrong. Tifa IS wrong. She was the one who did't want Zack to breathe or not keep the truth and the fact doesn't want one thing in return, she goes bonita psycho? I think thats a bit of bull for me...

I understand fully well the madness existing here, but i think you were DEAD wrong in making him have to be the bad guy and Tifa right.

Just my personal view.

I think if you were ever a girl you would probably be the worst type of girl - gosh, its so crazy how these characters are. Its like you're bored of making happy people.

You had to have made the biggest orgy amongst all of them, and everyone is pregnant and slept with everyone else. Why does everyone kiss everyone else?

Man, dont take anything i've said too much to heart. I absolutely love this story but you're crazy having all this madness down. I just think your characters are little too chaotic...

Oh and i thought Aeris should have died. Just because karma would have it so too...

I think that is part of being a good writer too when you write off the characters and not keep pulling them in. There are some unforgivable things ppl can not forgive for. If your mother abandoned you, would you be as half as nice as kadaj was? I think some questions are rhetorical and the answer is there, but you make it opposite.

Yes go right ahead and express your style of writing, but make it fair and realistic. Unless you dont appreciate that style.

That's was amazing andnim glad I read through the ride(: I loved the way the ending was just so.. Uplifting! Honestly, I was excited with the whole

"zack and I are married" "I'm pregnant" "I'm engaged"

And then Denzel? Still cracks me up!

I loved this and maybe another time, I will reread this again, because it was really just that amazing(:

Thanks!

Cloud is a punk bro -_- and I really LOVE zack and tifa together in this(: and Denzel! Goodness this kid has a knack for being a perfect kid

Heh, heh I'm kind of late getting to this story, but I must say well done! I'm absolutely in love with your fics! I also should thank you whole-heartedly for introducing me to my new favorite pairing (well besides Yuffentine), Zack x Tifa.

Deliciously dramatic! Normally, I wait til the end of a story before reviewing, but this is a lovely piece of work. Very consistent, well thought out, and very human. The only bit of constructive criticism I could possibly offer is this: watch the drama. You have so many brilliant ideas, there simply may not be room for all of them at once! It hasn't gotten out of hand so far, but be sure to watch that fine line - it doesn't usually take much to go from "delicious" to "disaster." Don't let it go though! Right up there with the humanity of the characters and their situations, the elegant style of writing, and the beautiful way you manage to get the emotions of the story to your audience, your flair for the dramatic is one of your strongest points. Let it shine as much as you can without overshadowing your other talents!

I love it! I especially love the part with Denzel screaming that he and Marlene will be moving in together :D! Thank you!

Dang, I loved this chapter just as much as the last. You're a wonderful writer.

I did a review on chapter 16 as well and I realized that I'm a horrible person for commenting about errors when I spelled Tifa's name wrong. Forgive me TT

Dang, I loved this chapter just as much as the last. You're a wonderful writer.

I did a review on chapter 16 as well and I realized that I'm a horrible person for commenting about errors when I spelled Tifa's name wrong. Forgive me TT