This story is pretty good. :)
i can tell that as i read more of your fics i that you get better in writing.

Oh man it sucks that I only managed to read this now

BASCH SCORES!

but then, this is the end? Aw shucks! I wanted MORE. But I'll be looking forward to the other fic. More power!

I've read this chapter days ago, but only now had time to review! :(

You wrote perfectly a Basch!mad :D I was drawn to him! And, in his state of confusion, he does what he does for her?! Wow, I tell you, nice touch! :D And that last part, so endearing! It was a great thing to make her listen to his desperate words.

"His heart beat like the wings of dragon." That is probably my favourite sentence. It really shows how powerful his heartbeats are for her :) I liked the comparison :D

Full devastation? Oh, poor Basch. I hoped there was more to read, but you already finished :( but I saw that you updated another fic! In time, I want to read that one too :D

Cheers, and thank you for sharing this wonderful story :)

Oh Nice!

Yes, a confused or berserked Basch would be pretty scary seeing as he can kill all his own friends with his bare hands!

*Ah! OH SHI- Basch got Confuse cast on him... RUN!*

Very sweet how Ashe's kiss pulled him out of it. :D

Nice story! I will watch for more from you!

~Famke~

Hey! I am so glad that you did go ahead with this chapter! And that it isn't the last one! XD

A nice piece with Basch getting hit by the confuse spell and believing that Vossler had killed Ashe. Mental Basch, Basch gone bye bye. An enjoyable read. :)

Well who needs esuna for confuse when a kiss from a cured unpetrified princess will do just the job?

Please do carry on with this and I will be looking forward to anuffer Basch/Ashe story from you!

Wai!! it gets better and better.

Oh crap. being petrified is a freaky thing. Now I regret maximizing the countdown thing... i promise to cast stona right away from now on.

I love love love this fic. I am eager to see how it ends!! more power!

WOW. the previous chapter didn't seem rushed at all! In fact, I liked the dream sequence thing. I LOVE this chapter. and I like the tiny details (Balthier being "nice" and Vossler frowning, hahaha) wow wow (goes off to read the rest)

I just found this story and only now have been able to read this. It is very good, the first chapter was kind of short but was still full of content and expression. As I read on from chapter to chapter I saw improvement and the chapters seemed more planned and flowed together more smoothly... that happened to me when I first started writing my stories, they got better with every chapter - or so I hoped :)

I love how you use your words to make everything so vivid but not cluttering it with too many at the same time. The storyline and where it is going it great as well, you have me hooked on this now. I have to know what happens next! :D

Good Job!

~*~ landis icelilly ~*~

Ah, this was intense ;) I am loving it! Sorry for not reviewing as soon as the chapter was out :(

I love Basch willfulness to stay on alert to protect the princess, fighting his weariness all the time. I love how you describe Ashe's feelings about love...

And I loved the last part! It's very... creepy. It was like I was feeling as well the Petrify spell... very well written, descriptive. I really like it to read...

The next chapter will not be the last one, right? I hope not :( because I can't possibly get tired of more BaschxAshe ;)

One more chapter to come?! No more after this?! Aw! No!

But this was lovely.

"You make a soft landing." This was a sweet line.

The dream Basch had of Vossler...the impending betrayal of the other knight..interesting. But it's so wonderful that he is thinking of Ashe. I like that because he is weakened, he is kept at the back. Unlike in real game play, it's normally Basch who is the first to go in and attack! :)

"it was something she had felt only a taste of before- it was love. She knew it now" Big Beamy Smile. BBs! :)

This was a lovely addition. Waiting for the next/last one with holding breath! Will there be the moment?! I hope so.

Excellent! Marvelous! If the next chapter is indeed the last, I shall despair. :(

It surely is :) this is flowing! I am now officially addicted, and I hope to read more soon.

I almost heard the "sickening thud" and then the "The last thing he saw before darkness overwhelmed him was Ashe, safe and unbroken in his arms." was really something :)

It shows how much he is concerned about her. Even if he thinks he is about to die :)

Please, keep up :)

This is a lot better! You've really got the flow going now!

I could just see it all happening so clearly and the worry and fear Ashe expressed for her Knight's safety was a lovely piece of writing.

"Repressing a smile, she put her lips to his ear and whispered his name." This was a great line to put at the end!

I am really looking forward to the rest and yes, planing out what you're going to put in it, certainly helps!

Nice chapter! Keep it up and update soon!

Okay, here's the review. I like this. Keep it up! Write more soon

Hey nice. Keep it up!