kewl luve the intro! =]

Gah, 'tis me again! Sorry for putting up yet another comment, but I wanted to share with you what I found...I checked the subtitles on that part of the movie we were talking about, and they DO say Bill. The Essential Guide book said Phil. I'm thinking the reason there's been confusion is that whether you listen for Bill or Phil, it could sound like either one! I had always heard Phil, and I still can, but when I listened for Bill, I definitely heard that. So, my verdict is that it sounds like *both* names...almost as if he's saying "Phbill," but I'm ACTUALLY going to change my mind and go with Bill from now on. Because I THINK it DOES sound more like that. Might have something to do with the sound of the water as he moves onto the screen or whatever, but yeah, I do really think he said Bill. xD Not a big difference, but ha ha, I'm glad I finally cleared that up..lol.

Okie dokie! :) It wasn't any big deal, really. Just wanted to point it out. ^^ And ha ha, thank you for saying that...everyone tries to make my 'obsessions' out to be some kind of negative thing, like I'm a nutjob, and I do have a *lot* of them, but...HA! Take that, people! I'm not that weird! XD I think it's great too!

Yay, I'm glad you're going to finish it! :) It's totally ok, I understand about not having time. And you're welcome. ^^ I did actually look up Tad's dad's name and the FN Essential Guide says Phil. I didn't pop the DVD in because I'm really sure I can hear him introducing himself as Phil (since, LOL, I kind of have the movie memorized..eh heh..I'm that obsessive o_o). But whatever, Phil, Bill, they do sound similar anyway, and the point is, it's a fun story! ^.^

Oh, another thing...I'm thinking that you've got Bob, Ted, and Bill as the parents of Sheldon, Pearl, and Tad, right? But Tad's pop is named Phil. I hope I don't confuse myself here too, but Bob & Sheldon are seahorses; Ted and Pearl are flapjack octopuses; and Tad and Phil are long-nosed butterflyfishes. Yeah! That's it. xD I think you've mostly got it right, but I was occasionally confused because in the story Phil became Bill and then the name Tip turned up somewhere and...well, whatever. >]

So cute! :) Nice Nemo fic. (I caught a minor mistake in chap. 3, that being that Mr. Ray isn't a manta ray, but as far as the storywriting, you're good! ^^)

Yippie! You added Dory!
oh, and I think that the one father fish that you call Tip...
I think his name is actually Tad:)

likeing the story dude^^
and yeah! dory is in it^^

O! wHO could it be?!?
I like your style so keep going!
And don't worry...I've got writer's block right now too:(
by the way...what happened to Dory?
Marlin can't go on an adventure without Dory!

Nice story so far.
I'm not sure where you are going with it but i like to be surprised! Keep up the good work! Check out my story too!

This is so good! I love your style of writing! Update soon!