I liked this story

Nicely done. I've enjoyed your other writing as well, especially your Dark Angel stories. Please keep writing T:SCC, this fandom needs good writers like you!

Although I still have some complaints about TSCC, I have to admit that I was moved by the scene and you've captured the moment very well. The music, which is done by the same composer who does the re-imagined Battlestar Galactica, fitted in perfectly with the scene.

I wonder what would have happened if Sarah Connor had also been there as well and what she would have gone through to hold it together.

Well done.

I love this story!! it was really good!! Im starting to love derek/john moments!! They make me all gooey inside, lol!!