sad but moving, good work!

Like it. It does seem like Mark was always on the edges of things, it makes sense that he would feel like this. Nice job with this, even if it is depressing.

Amazering...

ohohoh! -hugs the non-whiny mark- that was very very good i really like your mark, almost as much as i like your writing style :)

Gaaah, you gave Mark hope! I have to kick you out of the HopelessMelencholyMark Club now. ::sniffles:: Buuuut, it was great. As usual. You have a flare for writing Mark, and even tho peices like this have been done before, I can recognize it as a venting peice and the prose is nice. Good job _ ::gives Jen muffins::

This was a really great piece! I could totally see Mark contemplating all this. Keep writing!

Like it... Definitly like it... I think that Mark would be a bit more depressed and downtalking himself, but still, very good.

I like it...and I like that Mark was able to move on in the end...like get on with his life and not give up

kinda gets at why we love him i think, because of that aloneness that we all feel and relate to

Prtty good. :)