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| intercostalspace 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusesatisfactory ending! :D |
| Roman C Lee 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseYAY! This was fantstic! The fighting scean coluld have been better but It was fine the way it was. If you werent in the mood, you werent in the mood. I'm so glad Hinata showed how much she missed Naruto! I knew she had to be missing him, or hoped she couldn't just forget him, and now Naruto wont feel so alone, but it doesn't improve things really, now that I think about it. I just REALLY wanted him to know that it wasn't a one-sided relationship that he was clinging desperately to! This was fantastic, times infinity amazing. I shit you not, lol. I really want to see what happens next! If I couldn't read the sequell like IMMEDIATELY I think I might go insane . . . Would be better than not read ing the sequell, lol. ^-^ |
| Mate-of-Sesshy 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThat is so sad did hinta die or did she live if she died is she wil nar. please tell me thanks ^-^ |
| Daydreaming Miu 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE the story! Especially the last part between Naruto and Hinata. So sad. I almost cried! >.< Oh and I love mythology too! Especially the Cupid and Psyche story. I also love Greek and Indian Mythology. :) Keep making wonderful stories! v ^_^ v |
| chinookchick 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseis there more chapters?...plz say yes XD i like this story...the story of forbidden love..*sighs* i luv this story plz continue it? plz XD |
| Justary 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseLOVE IT! I love sasuke and sakura, and naruto an hinata too! I love the way you write and the sensual flavor you put in it! WAY TO GO!, Keep it up! |
| khannds 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abusehahaha!! another one!! :D so adorable!! :D can we be friends? ahhaha!:D I like your stories!! REALLY! :D ~~miyu |
| Wierdo-Lover 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseo.m.g. It was so sexy and then sad and then scary! And then it was sad again only to turn really happy! BUT THEN IT ENDED SAD! Your stories need to get a hold on their emotions! lol. |
| xxiluvemoboyzxx 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseomg i love it its so awsomz |
| Tenshihana- -Unyield Wish 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abusei really love this trilogy.. gawd.. |
| EdwardBella4eva620913 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was SO FANTABULOUS! If they had Fanfiction awards you would TOTALLY AND DEFINITELY win one! And thanks for dedicating this story to me! (And a few other people whose names escape me at the moment!) That was awesome and thanks again! |
| fuyukoigokoro 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseoh dat's wat emma-o menat lol i was thinkin da whole time wtf? is this a crack-fic? i dun really think so. emo-o? hm lol! |
| onyx eyed kitten 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseI loved this one too! Poor Sakura for having to die in such a horrible way though. At least Itachi didn't have time to give her a slow death. The ending was depressing(As I'm sure you intended it to be) but I'm glad Sasuke and Sakura got their happy ending. I'm sure Naruto and Hinata will as well. Great job, I really liked this one shot! |
| geishaninja 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed it. are you going to updata in a chapter to tell us when the 3rd par tis here? |
| NorthernLights25 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI loved this one! Cannot wait for Naruto's and Hinata's! XD |