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Reviews for: Running from Shadows
Jason M. Lee
2008-03-05 . chapter 2
The observation where the younger siblings balance out the older siblings'... violence is quite yin-yang.

It's usually the last one you expect. Wheeljack laying the smackdown on the twins regarding Nightraid and Prowl's case was a nice touch.
Elita One
2008-03-04 . chapter 2
ywha shes back online now
coolies
Dragowolf
2008-03-04 . chapter 2
GREAT STORY! I Love reading about the Limob siblings! They are so great!! But this last chapter is sad, I feel bad for Nightraid. If someone, even my twin, messed with my memories then I would have trouble trusting them again. But I suppose I would again if they earned my trust again. But you know love doesn't equal trust, trust is something you earn.

Then there is also the fact that Shadowrunner didn't trust her own sister. If she had then she wouldn't have thought to lock 'Raid's memory away. 'Runner would have trusted her to accept her for what she had done.

But I am glad that Sunstreaker was there to help her with her demons, I just wish there was someone who could help Bluestreak with his.

But what is this about Optimus and Elita looking at the programing of the twins... I sence a new story and plot coming. You know it is almost as if one twin is more violent then the other so as to fight Decpticons but to have the less violent twin to hold them back from trully becoming one.

I CAN NOT WAIT UNTILL THERE IS MORE! MORE PLEASE MORE!
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