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Slave to my Pen
2008-03-31
ch 13,
abuseFirst of all, you are talking about me? Right? If you are, sure, you can call me Slave. I, personally, would love to see them make cupcakes! Plus, I want to know more about this lady! You always make it so mysterious!(sp?) Thank you so much for this story, it rocks!
Slave to my Pen
2008-03-29
ch 12,
abuseWow, it's going so great so far, and I love the speed of the updates!
Slave to my Pen
2008-03-26
ch 10,
abuseI WANT TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THE BOOK! How could they capture Elphie?! All hopes are lost! *crys into corner of despair(sp?)* I don't have much critisism for you...
Slave to my Pen
2008-03-20
ch 8,
abuseOH! Now I'm interested what's in the book! UPDATE!
Slave to my Pen
2008-03-20
ch 7,
abuseI like this fight! Also, I studied Darwin for a bit in school...I think this story is really coming along, I don't know where, but it's definitely(sp?) going somewhere good. Thanks for continuing!
Slave to my Pen
2008-03-20
ch 6,
abuseOh my god! I love this chapter! And I am glad there isn't a lot of fighting. I mean, I'm all up for a good fight, and I agree with Elphaba it's hard not to fight. I can't wait for more.
Slave to my Pen
2008-03-15
ch 5,
abuseI'm still loving this, I also like the chapter in Elphie's POV. Just one thing, a lot of this story is fighting between Shandra and Elphie, I'd like to see a little more of other things, not that the fighting isn't good...
Slave to my Pen
2008-03-11
ch 4,
abuseStill love it, now I'm very curious what Elphie had to do with all of this...
Slave to my Pen
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuseThis is really great, I can't wait to see what happenes. Love the extraterrestrial part. I think Elphaba does pretty much fit the standerds of an alien...Love your interpitation of the characters.
Nicotinamide
2008-03-08
ch 2,
abuseStill sounding good. I hope you will continue with more chapters.
ren-san
2008-03-06
ch 2,
abusei luved it more chapters plz if u want to that
Meltalviel
2008-03-06
ch 2,
abuse"I know there are at least two of you who are reading it."
*giggles* Was that a hint?
I'm eyeing this with a bit of trepidation. It's good so far, but I don't usually care for OCs and universe-hopping.
I'm still reading it, though, which is why I put it on alert so I don't forget about it :)
Nicotinamide
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseI'm not usually a fan of OCs, but I have to say that this is well-written and I find myself definitely hoping you'll continue. The dialogue is very in character and entertaining.
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