 2Padfoot00Moony9 2008-06-16 . chapter 5Haha! =) Loved it!
I don't know why but I realy like the idea of Remus as a girl...
-2Padfoot00Moony8 |
 Beatrice Alice Potter 2008-04-27 . chapter 5AWE. SOME. loved the lucius part. and the pre/post-moon-syndrome part. only creepy part was the make-up. oh well. good job chibi! |
 Beatrice Alice Potter 2008-04-27 . chapter 4ahaha! well, i love reviews too, but don't scare us off!
hmm, Did you know I love you seemed to be thee question of the night
the isabelle peter stuff was sweet. james/lily? well, frankly it seemed out of place for this story, though not bad |
 Beatrice Alice Potter 2008-04-27 . chapter 3ah...stupid Isabelle! |
 Beatrice Alice Potter 2008-04-27 . chapter 2ahh. me lovey! and yesh, the ball thing...overused, but convenient, i won't hold it over ur head :D |
 Beatrice Alice Potter 2008-04-27 . chapter 1haha. author's notes are awesome!
but yeah, that was definitely weird, or, err, odd, but no denying it was good. |
 MinervaEvenstar 2008-04-06 . chapter 2I don't know how to say this nicely, but I'd rather be honest than falsely nice, so I might as well tell you that your descriptions of emotions aren't believable enough, and if you're going to include OCs explain them a little bit; don't just include them and expect you're readers to accept them. |
 Triizore 2008-04-04 . chapter 5Pretty good. Though I doubt Remus would wear makeup but the hair thing I can belive. |
 Toots McGonagall 2008-04-04 . chapter 5My name? It's something my dad used to call me when I was a toddler and it sort of stuck. There you go, a piece of random knowledge about an unknown person. Made your day didn't it, hahaha...
This epilogues was sweet and concise. Just as epilogues should be. It really wrapped up the story nicely, and I love how everyone got their happy ending (because I am, at heart, a hopeless romantic!)
Good job
x |
 Villisa 2008-04-03 . chapter 3you have a really good idea; however, you should read it again or have someone else read it for you because there are so many mistakes. Things are jumping around and some things happened without any reason (e.g. how did sirius know the name "cat"?) |
 Toots McGonagall 2008-04-03 . chapter 4Ha!
I love this story. It's really funny, and even though it's been done before, it still feels really individual and unique. Good job! |
 Triizore 2008-04-03 . chapter 4AWW... loved the ending. The whole same line thing was so romantic. It was great not many people can pull off the gender change in a romance.
Congrats!
~BA |
 mischief-managed-22 2008-04-02 . chapter 4Hurray hurray hurray for happy endings!! :) And Remus/Sirius slash. Hehe! |
 ranger girl 2008-04-02 . chapter 3 i love it please right more fast! |
 yiota 2008-04-01 . chapter 3 its ok but eww! did moony like padfoot any way i mean when he was a guy, anyways i dont know who would like that little rat eww izz and remus deffo thanks bye! |