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| 2Padfoot00Moony8 2008-06-16 ch 5,  | abuseHaha! =) Loved it! I don't know why but I realy like the idea of Remus as a girl... -2Padfoot00Moony8 |
| Beatrice Alice Potter 2008-04-27 ch 5, | abuseAWE. SOME. loved the lucius part. and the pre/post-moon-syndrome part. only creepy part was the make-up. oh well. good job chibi! |
| Beatrice Alice Potter 2008-04-27 ch 4, | abuseahaha! well, i love reviews too, but don't scare us off! hmm, Did you know I love you seemed to be thee question of the night the isabelle peter stuff was sweet. james/lily? well, frankly it seemed out of place for this story, though not bad |
| Beatrice Alice Potter 2008-04-27 ch 3, | abuseah...stupid Isabelle! |
| Beatrice Alice Potter 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseahh. me lovey! and yesh, the ball thing...overused, but convenient, i won't hold it over ur head :D |
| Beatrice Alice Potter 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusehaha. author's notes are awesome! but yeah, that was definitely weird, or, err, odd, but no denying it was good. |
| MinervaEvenstar 2008-04-06 ch 2, | abuseI don't know how to say this nicely, but I'd rather be honest than falsely nice, so I might as well tell you that your descriptions of emotions aren't believable enough, and if you're going to include OCs explain them a little bit; don't just include them and expect you're readers to accept them. |
| Charlie Weasley's Angel 2008-04-04 ch 5, | abusePretty good. Though I doubt Remus would wear makeup but the hair thing I can belive. |
| Toots McGonagall 2008-04-04 ch 5, | abuseMy name? It's something my dad used to call me when I was a toddler and it sort of stuck. There you go, a piece of random knowledge about an unknown person. Made your day didn't it, hahaha... This epilogues was sweet and concise. Just as epilogues should be. It really wrapped up the story nicely, and I love how everyone got their happy ending (because I am, at heart, a hopeless romantic!) Good job x |
| Villisa 2008-04-03 ch 3, | abuseyou have a really good idea; however, you should read it again or have someone else read it for you because there are so many mistakes. Things are jumping around and some things happened without any reason (e.g. how did sirius know the name "cat"?) |
| Toots McGonagall 2008-04-03 ch 4, | abuseHa! I love this story. It's really funny, and even though it's been done before, it still feels really individual and unique. Good job! |
| Charlie Weasley's Angel 2008-04-03 ch 4, | abuseAWW... loved the ending. The whole same line thing was so romantic. It was great not many people can pull off the gender change in a romance. Congrats! ~BA |
| mischief-managed-22 2008-04-02 ch 4, | abuseHurray hurray hurray for happy endings!! :) And Remus/Sirius slash. Hehe! |
| ranger girl 2008-04-02 ch 3, anon. | abusei love it please right more fast! |
| yiota 2008-04-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseits ok but eww! did moony like padfoot any way i mean when he was a guy, anyways i dont know who would like that little rat eww izz and remus deffo thanks bye! |