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| Yobling and Reela 4 ever 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseWow I totally agree with what everyone says and yes its absolutely an amazing fic about Warrick and Catherine! the irony plays out well and everything you described about how he's feeling now with detoxing and how he feels about Catherine, well everything about it was really great! You've done a great job keep it up! |
| speedcochrane 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseWow! Great story. This was certainly quite the insight to Warrick that I'd never really experienced before with any other piece--and Warrick has always been quite the mystery to me. Your use of description was so excellently done, I felt as if I was sitting across the table from Warrick, watching him and his burger or sitting with him while he was upchucking over the porcelain bus. (I know, delicately put, eh?) I always love it when an author doesn't rely soley on dialogue to hand out a situation but descriptives to compliment the atmosphere and mood. You did so very well and it's really what made the story more interesting. I liked that you relayed what had happened in previous episodes to this particular fic. Someone who would stumble upon your story would certainly understand what was going on because of this and not feel lost. It was a great way to bring in the reader and allow them to recognize their 'surroundings' in a way. Great job. Your characterization was spot on with Warrick and Grissom! Although, one thing concerned me. Did Catherine ever really make it a habit to called Warrick 'Rick? I thought only Brass did that. *shrugs* Either way, that's the only part that bothered me but the rest was superb. Excellent job, it really was one of your best. |
| CsIlove567 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseone of the most amazing yobling stories ive ever read! |
| DarkElvenPrincess4 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abusei read it...happy now? lol nice job |
| Jade of Purple 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abusePretty good story. I really liked it. Hopefully the next episode of CSI will be something like this. (Well, I can dream can't I?) |
| Harleyzgirl 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuse"Damn" city workers indeed! Well written. You managed a hard sell here bringing them together while detoxifying Warrick. Really good job. |
| lostladyknight 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseWhen I first whined to you that I didn't think there was enough new, good, YoBling out there I didn't dream that this would be the result. Not only are you absolutely kind enough that you'll dedicate your free time to writing something just because I had an urge to read it. I've never known anyone before that would write just to answer to my whims. I know it's incredibly selfish of me but I think one of my favorite things about this fic was that I know how it all started. There was much, much, more than that though. Your dead on depiction of a withdrawal hit close to home for me in several ways. I'm going to go with the easy route for explaining how I know so much about it. I used to write RENT fanficiton and you have to dedicate a lot of hours to researching drugs and drug related problems to write a decent RENT fic. You did absolutely wonderfully with the withdrawl aspect. As much as I hated to see him going through that I still enjoyed it. You just did so well. The way you developed the relationship between Warrick and Catherine was also amazing. I think you did wonderfully with it. You didn't rush through anything, obviously, but it showed. You could see the careful consideration that seemed to have gone into every single line. I mean, I just grow sick of fanfics that have Catherine and Warrick come to the rescue and then they just fall on top of each other and start bopping like rabbits. That's just not respectable and it's not good fiction. All of that leading up to an electrified kiss seems so much more logical and to be honest I think it's more in character. Another thing I adored was that even though you have the playful banter mixed in with all of that angst. It was so human that you did that. I mean even in the darkest moments it's really natural for a person to make a jab or joke, just to lighten things up a bit. It was just such a good choice on your part to mix in that little twinge of humor... it made it seem so much more real. My favorite part though? That first kiss. That was beyond the shadow of a doubt the best first YoBling kiss ever written. I mean that. It was stunning. Overall on a scale of one to ten I'd have to give this story a twelve. It was absolutely fantastic. I'm not sure I noticed a single thing that was anything less than perfect. Thank you, truly, for writing this. -LLK |
| TwistedSister03 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abusethat was too cute! great job =] |
| Meliara45678 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved Catherine in this chapter! I also did not like it when Warrick got himself into trouble during this season. But she's helping him, which is great! They belong together, like Grissom and Sara. Kirsten |