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Koolneko22
2009-11-06 . chapter 8
Wow. I'm looking forward to this!!

I had a feeling Itachi wanted to do something to Sasuke-or his mind-besides just putting him to sleep that night.

I can't wait to read more. Keep writing!
velvet-prosthesis
2009-09-12 . chapter 8
I don't know how to review lol. This story is something out of ordinary, almost like it was told by the gods and polished by your hands. Epic.

Sasuke was incredibly mature, that was new. Itachi was well characterized as a genius without precedents but tainted by humanity and some deviousness at the same time.

It took a lot of time reading it, because I first read it really fast and then I decided to re-read it again. This was only the first part, and I'm already slight trembling lol. I think I will need a break before I proceed into reading the second part. According to Hikari, it is quite powerful.
lyAlive
2009-07-12 . chapter 6
My exact words after reading Mangekyou Sharingan:

"Oh, **."

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lyAlive
2009-07-11 . chapter 1
Oh, that was cute. x3

Ly
LadySaturnGirl
2009-06-27 . chapter 1
Since I've been reading part II, this one seems so innocent compared to that one, especially now that I know what really went on with Itachi hypnotizing Sasuke. I love the contrast with Tsukiyomi and Amaterasu. I think that's one of the things that really makes this story so enjoyable for me other than the obvious Sasuke/Itachi forbidden love theme. And of course, I love anything that delves into the dark past of Itachi and the events that preceded the Uchiha massacre. And I like how the story of Shisui's death was told, how it wasn't just murder disguised as suicide but as an actual suicide due to Itachi not loving Shisui as much as Shisui loved Itachi. Oh, and the kiss between Itachi and Sasuke was awesome. It seemed so innocent but now after reading part II, I read it now and wonder if maybe that isn't quite the case.
Lunarkitty15
2009-06-20 . chapter 8
OMG! LOVE LOVE LOVED THIS STORY! CANT WAIT FOR THE SECOND PART SU! <3 Poor Sasuke and Itachi!
FluffyKeira
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
That was so cute! Can't wait to read the rest! x
Kyuuka-Kyubi
2009-04-13 . chapter 7
Gaah! *goes off to read the sequel*
Kyuuka-Kyubi
2009-04-13 . chapter 5
Wow! Love the angst! Lovely way of writing!
Kyuuka-Kyubi
2009-04-13 . chapter 4
Beautiful writing style.
Kyuuka-Kyubi
2009-04-13 . chapter 2
Cuteness!
Kyuuka-Kyubi
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
What a cute first chapter! XD *goes off to read the rest*
AyeEnKei
2009-01-08 . chapter 7
i meant "enveloped" not "ensued" on my comment on the Dont Play With Me PART II teaser >.
AyeEnKei
2009-01-08 . chapter 8
Wow, I was completely ensued by the way this story is written! It apsolutely pulls me in and I love how your wording gently grazes over the most intimate moments of the Uchiha brothers and lightly reminds the reader how the brothers know their incest is wrong, but washes readers over in waves of that irristable forbidden love that makes it so hard to stop reading. Just, amazing. I read every single chapter.
LuvDaAlchemist
2009-01-02 . chapter 8
I really liked this story. You seem to understand the characters better than most authors here on .

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