 tifa07 5/7/12 . chapter 12Aww, that was nice! Really enjoyed reading this and I say this is one of the best stories I've read so far. You write well and portrayed very well the characters. It's a shame though that Quatre has no love interest here, but oh well :D keep it up! will add this to my favorite :D |
 tifa07 5/7/12 . chapter 12Aww, that was nice! Really enjoyed reading this and I say this is one of the best stories I've read so far. You write well and portrayed very well the characters. It's a shame though that Quatre has no love interest here, but oh well :D keep it up! will add this to my favorite :D |
 FateStryke 6/16/10 . chapter 12Wow, just wow. I loved this story, it was wonderful. The writing was inspirational. Heero was portrayed perfectly as was Relena, I also loved how you put the other couples into the story. Showing how all the relationships developed not just Heero and Relena's. Thank you for writing such a great story.
-May your pen never leave the page
Fate Stryke |
 knight with out heart S-K 4/14/10 . chapter 1hey that was good
like it keep it up
like that hm!
s\k |
 jenni 9/18/08 . chapter 12 great! you stayed true to each carter aking the real and showed heeros perfet soilder strgle for love |
 SiLvErMoOnWiNg 1/21/07 . chapter 12*jumping for joy* YAY! I loved the ending. It was so cute and perfect. I really loved that scene with Heero and Relena. It was so adorable how Relena thought that Heero loved someone else, that she had no idea that who he was in love with was her. Heero was so cute also, he couldn't breathe when he saw Relena and he was nervous when he was talking to her. I loved it, it was so adorable.
I love this new Heero, but I'll always love Heero no matter what happens to him. He's more human, no longer a monotone soldier. Heero is so much more open with his emotions and his heart. I like that he no longer hides what he feels, that he doesn't keep to himself. Like in the end how he told Relena that he's in love with the most beautiful woman ever. My heart melted during that scene..*kawaii* It's always nice to see a happy Heero.
You were so cruel, making it seem that Relena was dead when she wasn't. But you didn't fool me. *laughs playfully* When I was reading this I really thought that Relena had died, I couldn't stop crying. But somewhere in my head I doubted Relena's death. I believed that she was still alive, that it just seems like she was dead and then in the end you'd find some way to write that Relena never died. And I was right. Thank you for not killing Relena and instead having her and Heero end up together.
When I first read this story I couldn't stop reading it. I managed to finish reading it in one day. I only wish that I could have read this story sooner. You have great talent in writing. I hope that you write more stories esp. Gundam Wing stories.
*SiLvErMoOnWiNg* |
 SiLvErMoOnWiNg 1/21/07 . chapter 11*tears falling freely* NO! Relena can't die. They don't deserve this. She just can't die. It'll kill Heero. This was so sad, so HEARTBREAKING. It was so sad that Heero's nightmare came true and that it was real, no dream.
Once again you've managed to keep Heero and Relena in such great character even despite their current circumstances. I think you portayed them perfectly. This was well-written. The way you wrote Heero's reaction to Relena being shot was so real and raw; he never once slipped out of character. I think that this is how Heero would react if he were really thrown into this kind of situation.
I liked how you described how the sky looked, and how you used it as a metaphor that something bad was about happen. Well I'm off to finish reading this story. HOPEFULLY, Relena doesn't die.
-(SiLvErMoOnWiNg)- |
 SiLvErMoOnWiNg 1/21/07 . chapter 10*teary-eyed* *blows nose with tissue* Completely Mindblowing! This chapter was truly touching. It was sweet, but with an essence of sadness to it. I couldn't stop crying at how much in pain Heero was...poor Heero. But then Relena helped him, protected him, she saved him.
This chapter was beautifully written. It was so real and genuine. You managed to capture both Heero and Relena perfectly. I don't think it could have been written any better. I loved this chapter, truly mindblowing. I don't think I've read a story that has Heero in turmoil with himself, well not like this. Usually it's Relena that breaks down in tears while Heero is just there unaffected by everything as if nothing can hurt him. He's always the perfect soldier and never experiences pain.
But this is different. It's always nice to see how things are from Heero's point-of-view instead of always Relena's. Because then we could truly understand the type of person Heero is. That he isn't a machine, but that he is just like everyone else: he is human (even if he is the Perfect Soldier).
-(SiLvErMoOnWiNg)- |
 SiLvErMoOnWiNg 1/21/07 . chapter 9*squeals* The Heero and Relena was priceless. It was so beautifully written. So sweet. *sniffles*
But I'm so mad that they weren't able to kiss. It was so close. Ugh..why'd Relena have to pass out at that moment. Couldn't she have waited one more minute. lol. Loved this chapter.
-(SiLvErMoOnWiNg)- |
 SiLvErMoOnWiNg 1/21/07 . chapter 6Oh my god! Dorothy and Relena were so close to each other and they didnt even know. It's so frustating. So close...really perfect timing. Dorothy seems so stuck-up here. Well anyways its a good story. |
 Ukotai 12/4/06 . chapter 12AH!
I finally found this story...thanks to you! I love it so much i was getting so sad when i thought relena had actully died oh man thank you thank you thank you this really a wonderful story and as much as i love the ending the best part for me was when relena was at the bar. You are a wonderful author and i hope you never stop wrighting...wrighters block be dammed! Good luck with your other storys
Triple A
Alanna Woodbeck |
 animEphunK13 7/29/05 . chapter 12ei! i just read THE WHOLE story of yours and it is so good. hope you'll write more...
keep rockin! |
 animEphunK13 3/28/05 . chapter 1God! You know how a talented writer you are? I really... really love you're story. It's... cool. just wish i could or would write as good as you. honestly i only read the first chapter and i plan to finish reading it. i'm gonna write my own fanfic and i hope it will be, at least, half as good as yours. Keep up the good work! |
 jisAtsU siLENcE 4/1/04 . chapter 12omg! to cute of an ending! KAWAII! I loved it .. hehe ... great job! ... oh so cute! ) |
 sTrAwBeRrY 1/19/04 . chapter 12 Hey, great story! u totally had me there, I thought Relena was dead, and I was so sad until, well, the end.
You should definitely do a sequel, it's a great story and you could take advantage of that, I mean, at least, I think I'm not the only one who would read it, you know.
Well, it's up to you, I'll go check out your other stories now.
BYE! (but hoping to hear from u soon in the sequel, yeah, do it, plz!) |