Reviews for Yeah, He Rode Good

Minty Says 2008-03-06 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this. Good idea. ~Minty
Fosterchild 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseI teared up a little when Sylvia was in the room remembering. It's all so final. I like how you wrote in bits and pieces. Just moments in time.
Misfit Greaser 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseYou did a great job on this, Flower. The emotions and rememberance are superb. Misfit
Maxiekat 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseThis was great, Flower. I loved reading a sympathetic view of Sylvia and that you had her and Buck connect over their loss of Dally. You've also got a really good ear for believable dialogue and I liked the way you wrote Angela, too. Great job!
mars on fire 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseJust a few corrections - " gave him a dirty looked" should be "looked". There were a few missing pieces of punctuation in the dialogue as well. I really love the whole thing, though. Especially all the parts with Sylvia and Buck - I love the way you write them! I could actually see a couple come out of that the way you wrote them. I also love how Tim and her talked. I think Sylvia after Dally's death is a great person to write - she's sad and she's tough, but she's not like she was. Great job!
xocrazililkelox 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this ,It's nice to see Slyvia getting written about in a decent light.I hope to see more work from you soon.