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| SabaKun 2008-08-07 ch 1,  | abuseWow this is really good so far! Keep up the good work! I cant wait to read the next chapter and so on |
| Dragonheart666 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abusethat was so funny xD! |
| Setsumi-san 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseOh my God, that's hilarious (and HOT!!) Poor Bra saw her dad having sex! I must say I wish I had been in her position, though. Great job! |
| animechickk 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseso did she she "relieve" her self |
| lil joker 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abusepoor girl mow she is going to go thinking that all men look like that |
| LoveMeKags and Co. Producti... 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThis one was funny! Love, LMK |
| TigersBloodMagik 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseOh...My...And all I can think of is lucky Bra hahah! Man the complete build up of antisipation for this one is amazine. At first I was suprized thinking it was just going to be about Bra and some female problem, but that. Wow. Please please keep up with this one Slaughter, you've got something very good here!! |
| Zofonik 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseShort but funny. That'll teach her to pay more attention before she barges in. I feel sorry for Goku now having a fuming Vegeta yelling at him. Loved how you said this was endangered species mating too. |
| Ryo Toya 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseHaha! She so deserved that... wait... she got to see some sexy yaoi goodness... then ruined it... NO, SHE DIDN'T DESERVE THAT! :D That was pretty funny. Hmm... maybe now that she is gone they can resume their... activities? ;) Nice job, I needed a good chuckle at a character's expense today. :) |
| Julesie 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abusehaha the spoilt brat deserved it Great story hun, Didn't think i would enjoy it at first as it was from a female view but it was good ^_^ |