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December'sRose 3/6/08 . chapter 1This was fantastic! I really love your writing style, very amazing and it has a great flow. Please write more LwD one-shots very soon okay? _ December'sRose |
dramacrazed101 3/6/08 . chapter 1Haha! I loved it! |
Invalid Minds 3/5/08 . chapter 1...Wow. That was hot. xD Usualy I like fluff better, but this was really good! You should keep writing LWD. Jo |
missmiamya 3/5/08 . chapter 1Here's a review and in return I'd like ANOTHER CHAPTER! Haha okay so that was a little lame, but your Fic definately isn't so update soon! |
ForbiddenWords 3/5/08 . chapter 1omg i loved it! totally awesome! or as Marti would say :Kewal! lol loved it! it'd be awesome if it wern't a one shot |
knd 3/5/08 . chapter 1I am confused a bit. They did not go that "far" later on on the first night or any other night considering their age, did they? It would be plain wrong. It was just be awkward because of their age. If you could just continue this story it would be more than great! Splendid chapter |
TwilightGirl166 3/5/08 . chapter 1Aw... How cute ! |
Promise-V 3/5/08 . chapter 1oh em flipping gee that was a mazing its too bad that it's only a one shot it could be a great chapter story laterz, Promise-V |
moonlightfan 3/5/08 . chapter 1 nice nice very nice... are you gonna keep going with it? maybe switch up the pov? |
Lady Azura 3/5/08 . chapter 1M... dark and angsty. My favorite type Dasey one-shot. :P Great job! Hope to read more one-shots like this by you soon! :D |