Oh my god oh my god oh my god. This is truly perfect. I have read it countless times and it never EVER fails to make me smile.
Every single character is just flawless and amazing and it's like it came straight out of the musical.
Oh my god.
Please excuse me while I try to contain my squealing fit.
Thank you so much for using your obviously extensive talents to create something as perfect as this :D
Oh my god.

Love love love love love love love this! Fantastic job, I was totally engrossed in the last scene and I adored it! Great job! I also loved the conversation with her dad, it was awesome.

I absolutely love this - the characterisation is brilliant!

awww you have to continue this.

This is such a cute story! I really truly wish you would continue with it. You have characterized both Emmett's speaking voice and his inner-thoughts voice really, really well. You're a very talented writer! Please write another chaper!

Awes so sweet. I love how you started the story and ended it with Emmet thinking about the bus just with him having dirfferent reactions about it:)

KEEP WRITING!

hey um, could you update this please?

Absolutely adorable. You really have Emmett's voice down. I hope you update soon.

I really like this so far

Write more soon

Amazing start! I can't wait to read more.

This is really, really well written; I hope you continue it. Awesome job.

AMAZING! I need more more more! Its excellently written! Fantastic! I loved it! Please write more! :)

omigod! i loved it! poor emmett compairing himself to a dog, he is way more adorable then bruiser. update soon

Emmett is being a butthead, i can't wait until Elle sets him straight. great story i love it.