aw crap...crystal

thats kinda embarrassing...emmy

Aww, that was cute. OH Remus, your sly fox. haha.

Great chapter! Can't wait to see what will happen next.

Pix.

You weren't allowed to write during creative writing? What is this world coming to? Anyway...yay! :D I love how it's developing, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Let's just say that it was wirth the wait to read this chapter. I lovef it just like all the others. I still want to beat Siris's but for hurting Ivy! Luv Sin!

UGH.

i cannot believe Sirius.

grr.

i am loving this story still.

yet i am hating Sirius seriously bad right now.

[no pun intended.]

curse Mary also.

make sure to keep updating this one!

fyi, you creative english teacher obviously doesn't know what he is talking about.

dumb. [him; not you.]

i love how original your story is.

it is really wonderful. :]

I like this chapter and story and I can't wait until you update the next chapter. (I'm not complaining about how fast you update, because you update faster then most writers on .)

Please update soon! I wonder what happens next?

that really really sucks...crystal

I"M BACK! its a good thing she didn't take advice from crystal...emmy

aw angst and muteness...love!

you are doing really well on this story!

great chapter, but cruel cliffhangers! AH! poor ivy...update soon! please?

So I just started reading this story and I think it's really awesome. I love Ivy, she's a very real character, definitely not a Mary Sue. It's pretty refreshing. Anyway, I just wanted to say keep up the awesome work, you've got something really good here.

Well, your creative writing professor just sucks. And he/she is a bit of a liar too, this story proves you can write!

I love it, I'm hooked.

congratulations on being an awesome author -

Oh, oh Ivy. Im secretly hoping for a little Ivy and Remus action.

But somehow, I don't think thats going to happen.

Stupid dogboy. (Yeah, he's not even Sirius anymore, he is now... Dogboy.)

Pix

it's so sad about her. Poor Ivy. Hope it'll start to get better soon.

Great chapter.

aw, poor ivy, i feel bad for her. also, please don't make me wait for much longer for the next chapter. this is one of my favorites.