Ok this is the funniest thing I have ever read. I had trouble breathing and was crying so much from it.

oh ma god i was laughing so hard i couldnt breathe!

Hilarious! Genious! Amazing! Fantastic! I could go on and on about the story if I had a better vocabulary, lol. Poor guys. I'm surprised tehy didn't try to stop them though. Kind of a weird reaction that they would let their wives just go when they think they're going to cheat on them.

lol. That was hilarious!! I knew what it was from the begining (the "off-roading" comment kind of gave it away), but I still enjoyed it. The second part was funny, too, but I think you could draw it out more. It was hilarious though!

Great job!!

-awfullynormal @>->-

wow hilarious...

HAHAHAHA! This was hilarious.

llmmao... never would have guessed the lightsaber thing.
r u doing a third chapter?

tee hee.

BWAHAHA!
that is funny stuff!

Hilarious, I loved it!

HAHA chapter one was my favorite!!

hilarious

Lmao! Jedi outfits! Hah, they can alter the girls' heads with their mind powers! :)

ick. i think i'll go kill myself now.

I love fanfics like this, I've been looking every where for them. Write more chapters! I really enjoyed reading this, I got yelled at by my geography teacher because my friend and I were laughing too hard for it to be geography related. Of course, then she just had to see what we were doing, and I think she read one line before going red and started yelling at us again. The yelling was wasted, we were in hysterics.
I like the way you wrote this, I really, really, really want to read another chapter. Write more!

Overworked~

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