Great story,I personally love when crack pairings are produced while only slightly changing canon events. I especially liked the ending ;)

I'm a X/A Shipper through and through, but new stories are harder to come by so i read this and i actually liked it. I'm not converted or anything, but it is a definite possibility. Nice story.

great work, English was fine. i'm glad someone else is a G/A shipper! they wouldn't last long term but i certainly think they'd have some great short term experiences if you know what i mean lol ;-)

Hey, I'm not a Gab/Ares shipper but this was a sweet story and your English is great for someone who is not a native speaker. :) I look forward to reading more of your stuff.