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| Memphis Atari 2008-04-28 ch 1,  | abusesounds like a good idea |
| HANABI 2008-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoa... that is probably one of the best, if not THE best BleachSM pieces I've ever read. You captured Usagi's personality perfectly while molding it to your plot; it's a concept that too many authors have issues with. I hope to see more of this soon, and more of A Difficult Predicament and Hope, so update soon, please and thank you! ~HANABI |
| aslkjlsk 2008-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abusecool, update soon. |
| Purr 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story! I really can't recall the last time I've been so hooked to a fanfiction. It's great to see you posting again, even if it's something you wrote a year ago =P It's nice to see you back again, hopefully you'll stay a little longer this time? ^.~ Now, onto the story. You did a great job painting the picture of Usagi's family life. I really liked how you were able to change her upbring so much and still maintain her original personality. You were impeccable with your choice of wording too, it's rare now to find a story with good vocabulary and perfect grammar and spelling ^^; The relationship between Usagi and Serenity fitted the theme perfectly too. I never knew that Serenity could act so pompously and still be in character. Well, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I loved the light flirting between Keisuke and Usagi, although I have to admit that I'm a hardcore Urahara and Yoruichi fan ^^; |
| MoonBunny777 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseWow i really loved this chapter! I am so glad you decided to start writting it! I cant wait to see more of it so update soon! |
| Lady Suga 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, nice job! Your writing's improved so much... update soon! I really want a Byakuya pairing for this one. |
| kaze no haruka 2008-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseuwah~ I luv it! it's so good. i want a kisuke pairing! |
| lalala 2008-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome, kickass job! I absolutely loved it. It was so sweet and nostalgic and extremely well-written... write more SOON! |
| Sunshine Fia 2008-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey I remember this story from that fiction site Tenshi had!! I absolutely loved it because it seemed like Kisuke and Usagi were going to get together!! Bleach...how i love that show!! |
| Lady Light 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseoh is this is gonna be good! |
| Usagi Uchiha Yuy Kudo 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseahh im so excited for this story. it has a realycool start! realy awesome!! i luv it!! so cool. hope u update soon,-no pressure!! |