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| Princess in the Pea 2008-07-14 ch 13, | abusethese are very cute, and well written. you should just do a bunch of different holidays, like thanksgiving and christmas and easter, you could make those very entertaining |
| sammygirl1963 2008-07-14 ch 13, | abuseYeah, it was a departure from what you usually write but I really enjoyed this chapter with the tinge of danger to it! |
| Enkidu07 2008-07-04 ch 12, | abuseOMG. I laughed out loud. A lot. So much that my mom asked what was so funny and I read her a line or two out loud. Then she said, and then what happens? Read me more. I may get her sucked into this yet. Brilliant job. Maybe best chapter yet! though, I am foggy on the previous chapters, I may have to reread.. :) nice return on the apron and BRILLIANT FERNANDO! I loved him. I knew Dean would come around too. That was awesome! |
| sammygirl1963 2008-07-04 ch 12, | abusePoor Sammy, he definitely chose the wrong place to get his hair cut! |
| StrGazr04 2008-07-04 ch 12, | abuseLOL that was too funny! And poor Sammy! This line of Dean's made me crack up: “Ok, ok, chill. Look on the bright side. At least we won’t need to come back for a long time.” Very nice job. Looking forward to the next update |
| cozmikfaerie 2008-07-04 ch 12, | abusethis was too cute! I think I know Fernando...anyway, I really like these little peeks into the Winchester's life! |
| Sushi Chi 2008-07-04 ch 12, | abuseAh. Love that Dean got Fernando. Perfect there. And man, she did butcher Sam's hair. Good chapter. |
| Enkidu07 2008-06-16 ch 11, | abuseThat was priceless. I need to save these stories for when the angst gets too much too bear - they are such a nice little relief. And SO FUNNY. Great job. |
| sammygirl1963 2008-06-16 ch 11, | abuseLOL, loved it. I can so imagine Dean's face when he realized he lost his swimming trunks. |
| Music Lover 1214 2008-06-16 ch 11, | abuseI so wish I could've seen that! |
| beautiful dreamere 2008-06-16 ch 11, | abusewhat i wouldn't give to see that cannonball! lol very aweosme! |
| -blue-oyster-cult-love- 2008-06-16 ch 6, | abuse“I know. I wouldn’t. Cop might see, get jealous of me, and arrest me for being so good looking.” haha, that made me crack up so hard, i thought i would pee my pants... good lord, i'm getting a kick out of these... |
| -blue-oyster-cult-love- 2008-06-15 ch 2, | abuseLMAO! that was amazing. i haven't read the rest of them, ('cause i'm only on chapter 2 obviously)...but this one really makes me want to keep reading. lol amazingness. hahaha, i still can't get over it... *walks away chuckling* |
| GataBaja 2008-06-15 ch 6, | abusedean winchester, i will gladly be your old lady in your laundramat... woah! |
| GataBaja 2008-06-15 ch 5, | abuse... dean-bean. very inventive. i applaud you, jremme |