 funvince 2009-05-12 . chapter 1I could see Nabiki thinking like this. The philosophical argument was quite sound and interesting to read. |
 TegwenielWestwind 2008-03-30 . chapter 1I approve of this story! Good job of delving into some of the more "technical" aspects without boring the reader with uninteresting details. Slightly AU, but with the way you present it, it works well, and reads well. |
 Rose1948 2008-03-08 . chapter 1Nice insight! |
 Redzorin 2008-03-08 . chapter 1Nice freakin philosophical fanfic. |
 ToastedPine 2008-03-07 . chapter 1It's a bit dry since you wrote it more like a first person essay than an actual character study where a characters thoughts are revealed through their monologue as events unfold.
"Forever Artist" is an interesting character study for Kasumi, if you want to see what I mean. |
 Wonderbee31 2008-03-05 . chapter 1Interesting, and a little different view of Nabiki than usual, yet also showing her as the same person that she is in the manga(much worse than her anime portrayal imo). Nice character piece. |
 O'Donoghue 2008-03-05 . chapter 1A nice insight. |