 EvilBlackStar 2009-08-25 . chapter 3DUDE.
I love this.
Especially like the long chapters. Not loving the non-updates-for-ever, however.
I think Stan and Kyle should just sex it on. Right now.
Although, I do like the wait. It just gets boring if it goes right into it and then sits on that for ages.
At least, with the "Do I tell him? No wait, he's in love with Wendy. But wait, he totally has feelings for me. But wait. He's with Wendy. But wait..."
It keeps it interesting.
Anyway, yeah.
I like it, thus far. =D |
 kittie-kun 2009-05-05 . chapter 3OMG this is like one of the most amazing SP fics I've read. Ever. Please please please contiune! I want to know what happens next! This fic is simply amazing, you portray the charactors very nicely, and I love the storyline! *Favs* |
 Sheltie-chan 2008-12-29 . chapter 1(now... excuse me please for being maybe too... personal or scaring you or somthing... ... ...)
OH GOD HOW COULD YOU?! I gotta get up in the morning and we have frikkin' 3:41 am here, I can't continue with the next chapter! >.< *too much... pressure*
Okay, I calm down. This is one of the best fics I've ever read. And even when it may not look like it from my faves, I read loads of them (at least from my POV).
You got incredible style (...Style? *_* )there, you don't do grammar mistakes, you don't repeat words, you describe situations nicely, you... you have a great idea of the story... even when I've read just the prologue yet, I totally love it!
I honestly thought that you'd have had a lot more reviews when you had so many comments and faves on dA, but I'm quite disappointed by the people. Come on, folks, this fic is great! Well it's kinda hard to read, yes, but it's that what I would call a "higher" style of writing.
To the plot; I love fics with this idea, no matter how many of them have I read (not just SP) I can't help myself XD
But... you describe his feelings from his own point of view, so... exactly, one can feel the insecurity of the boy and doesn't know what happens, share his fears with him... gosh. This is awesome.
Since I don't like spoilers I haven't checked the next chaps, but I hope that you didn't really mean what you've written on the beginning... "eventual Stan/Kyle"
I love angst. I love this fic. I would have told you to "keep on the good work", but I won't since it's finished xD
I just bow. |
 eda1102 2008-12-28 . chapter 1I started to read it and I really really like this, |
 oNyx.mOnkey 2008-12-27 . chapter 3oh my got that was so AMAZING! PLESE UPDATE SOON! ASKSJKKJJSGDLJFHHGD! XD |
 Army of Smith 2008-11-15 . chapter 3excellent! more please! |
 Tabbikatt 2008-10-26 . chapter 3I am REALLY liking this story! :D
Please update soon? PLEASE! |
 kitty-cakes 2008-10-19 . chapter 3OMG YAY! I was so happy to see you guys had updated this fic!
O a camping trip, huh? Some good opportunities... perhaps? fufufu~ >:D
Well I can't wait to find out what happens next! ^^ |
 DeathByIrony 2008-10-19 . chapter 3yay, you updated! gosh, i feel bad for kyle, what with stan ditching him, kenny destroying his optimism, cartman just being an ** like usual, & wendy obviously doesn't like him. poor thing. but anyways, update soon. :) |
 Mrs. Stanley Marsh 2008-10-19 . chapter 3You have to write more!
I read the first paragraph, and after that I didn't take my eyes off of it till I got to the end!
But It didn't finish though...
Make kyle and stan get together :D
Please :)
This is the best story I have ever read on this site...
And I have read a lot!
Please finish it.
X |
 squirt1122 2008-10-18 . chapter 3im likin it more and more, i cant wait to read about the camping trip, and i feel kinda bad for Stan in the end, did kyle really have something to say to him or what, ugh, just cant wait to read the next chapter! it sounds promising! |
 KittyCatNinja17 2008-10-18 . chapter 3Great chapter =D I cant wait to read more ^ ^ |
 squirt1122 2008-10-17 . chapter 2this is a great story so far, if you could just add more on to it itwould be even better, it would be great to know what happens!! |
 DeathByIrony 2008-06-28 . chapter 2i love this story. please update soon, don't just forget about it. :) i'll be looking forword to it. |
 Mystik Genie 2008-06-21 . chapter 2i saw the pic on Deviant art and i had to read it ^_^ can't wait to read more |