Utterly adored this story. I wish you did own the boys so they would be "officially" gay for each other! LOL. I especially liked the end line.

"“They slammed the door on it… o-over and over… Abe-kun…”"
OW,OW,OW,OW! I cringed when I read that.

"...You’re not just a catcher..."
It ought to be "pitcher", yes?


Bramblerose4

*Squeals* THIS IS RIDICULOUSLY CUTE! >3< You captured their personalities perfectly! MY GOD I LOVE THIS <3 <3 <3

These two could Kill someone with there cuteness..SRSLY XD
I hope Abe beats up the other team after the game :D

Another success!
(gawd, I love the way you write)

Again, keep up the wonderful work!

AW! <3 cute!!

X3 Okay, this was adorable. Poor Mihashi though! Those jerks from the other team purposely harming him just to win. I've never seen this anime/read this manga. But now I'm definitely looking it up! :D For your first fic of the series, you really succeeded in pulling me into it. :3

Loved your disclaimer, btw. It made me laugh. XD

lovely fluff

love it *_*

Gr, how dare they do that to poor Mihashi!! I hope Abe does something about it later, haha.

Very sweet ficlet. Love this couple!

~fd97

aww...lovely, kawaii, dude if i owned them they'd be gay for eachother, cause man they so perfect for eachother! see yha

This is really sweet!
I love Oofuri, and I love AbeMiha!
you captured their personalities so perfectly...Great job!!

oh gosh. This. Is. So. CUTE.

ok ok, but besides being adorable on, like, every possible level, it's written wonderfully too! It just flows together so nicely, and both Abe and Mihashi are in character~ LOVE IT, great job.

-sque- X3 i love oofuri! Not really so much baseball, but I love Oofuri. ah. ^^ When i watch it whenever i see abe and mihashi together i practically expect them to hug each other some time but they haven't done it. T_T grr. I mean seriously, i'm like... yeah... EXPECTANT nearly. haha, well but honestly I can't see the two kissing... But still this was really nicely written! ^^ -mihashi smile- lol.

I loved this, it just fits the two of them so well. I can't say enough good things about it, the writing is fantastic, and tje kiss sweet and romantic. Great job.

Awws. This is super-cute.