This story was a mixture of amusing and heartwarming. The part where Liam decided to try and out-stare the dog was funny, but I think the best part was the conversation Will had with his son. I also compliment you on your style, which was very engaging. All in all an excellent story, thanks so much for sharing it with us.

It was very cute-definitely interesting to see Will and Elizabeth in their roles as husband/wife and father/mother. I loved hearing all Liam's reflections on traits he had inherited from his parents. Will and Elizabeth's banter was well done.

I loved Elizabeth's reflections on how natural a father Will was...and that her two 'boys' took the same side against her. It made they family dynamic and their interactions more realistic and detailed. Apparently, the two William's get along even better for having so little time together.

Just one suggestion: change Liam's age. I grew up with a mom who was a daycare provider in our home and Liam just didn't seem seven to me. His thought processes at the beginning were alright, perhaps too old, but the idea of the staring contest with the dog seemed a little too immature. In addition, the manner of Will's response just seemed like it would suit a younger child better...maybe a five-year old?

Great job with this fic. It showed a broad range of emotion, and provided us with a (not too, thankfully!) intimate glimpse at the Turner family's domestic life. Avoiding the confusion of which Will is who by using a middle name was a fabulous idea, by the way, if a bit unorthodox :)

A great story. Very good.

Ooh, a story about Poochie! I love Poochie!

I liked your characterization of William and how you describe dhis thought processes.

Despite what any dvd insert says, Will totally got his life back at the end.

I love that pic.

very cute! I liked it a lot!

I'm gonna add this to my favorites. very different, which is one reason why I liked it so much. :D

take care

~grecian~

Aw...such a great story. Liam is so cute! And I love how you devised a way for Will and Elizabeth to be together during the ten years.

Aww! I love Liam. I love that you used the name 'Liam'. It's the perfect name for him. I loved this. It is so adorable.

One thing though: Mohammed is not an Indian name. It's Arabic. BIG difference.

Other than that, it was wonderfull.

I loved it Leah! Very very sweet, I loved most Will and Liam's interaction, the part I really liked was when he told him two more years, it was just so utterly sweet, I could really picture that!! And I think you captured the pic perfectly!! Loved the end too! Loved all around lol!!

This was SO good! I loved the interaction between Will and Liam, and between Will and Elizabeth.

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