Reviews for The Cobra's Touch

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Edward's Personal Stalker 2008-09-09 ch 9,	abuseAAWW! You poor dear! Take as much time as you want!We understand! Just feel better! PLLEASE! Gives you get-well-cake and cards.
The World is a Stage 2008-09-07 ch 9,	abuseHey, just wanted to say keep your head up, and know that we're all behind you, and waiting patiently (well in my case semi-patiently = p) for the next chapter. Hope everything sorts itself out. I'll be thinking of you, take care and we'll all be waiting when you're back. = )
EternalOctoberNight 2008-09-07 ch 9,	abuseHey its alright, I dont mind waiting until youre ready to read another chapter. I like your story enough to be paitent. Looking foward to your next chapter.
PercussionGirl 2008-09-07 ch 9,	abuseTake as much time as you need.I know that life can get really hard sometimes.Even when you think things are ok,something can completely ruin it and bring up all of those old problems.Right now,you should worry about yourself and take a break from the story.We can handle the waiting,andthe sories not near as important as the writer.So,just forget about the story for now and concentrate on feeling better.Don't try to rush yourself,just update when you feel like it.I hope that things will start working out for you.Until then you should take a break from the story and deal with the more important things first.:)
s2Teennovelist 2008-09-06 ch 9, anon.	abuseHey i totally understand, i've had to survive weeks without internet and i'm currently in collage trying to balane school work, writing and typing and reading and editing stuffmy friends send me over the internet. Take your time and work out the crisis first i dont mind waiting.
MirrorFlower and DarkWind 2008-09-06 ch 9,	abusei understand and cannot wait for the next chapter
Tutsuya 2008-08-26 ch 8, anon.	abuseis that the last chappie?!?!?!
s2Teennovelist 2008-08-09 ch 8, anon.	abuseFirst off, i love this story! it's so awesome. I just got obsessed with inuyasha this summe thnaks to my boyfriend and i love it. I've always been a fan of stories where kagome and inuyasha's roels are switched but this is the first oen wheere they're voth still in charactwr and how the plotis completely altered but still carries the same stoeyline and i love how you added sesshomaru and kikyo too. i always loved kikyo and kagome as sister and i love how you tied naraku in this and how you did a total rewrite of his he turned kikyo and kagome against eachother liked it so much better than what happened with her and inuyasha. i also love how sesshomaru is int his too! i love it when him and inuyasha have a somehwat brotherly bond, but are still totlly in character, which they are, cuzmi'm such a sucker for characterization even kikyo and love how you present her so we can understand her bettee thought i was with sesshoaru about how she acted about love and such. This is such an awesomestory and i love it. Are miroku and sango gonna be in this too? i would assume so cuz shippo is, and i'm curious to see if rin is in this too, since i'm kinda rin and sesshomaru fan cuz i just love th positive influence they have of eachother. i'm also curiosu to see if tao comes back since kikyo was ressurected in the original. plus you're one of those people who actually updates! i love this story and i can't wait for the next chapter! keep it going!
jayray557 2008-08-07 ch 8,	abuseI really love this story i have to say its one of my favorites and just how u twisted around the story yet its got the same plot area in it. Hey is Kikyo gonna get with Sess sence Kagomes gonna be with Inu. Anyway please update soon my computers acting up so i dont know when the next time im gonna be on is. U should make Sess end up with an OC and have Kikyo end up getting Taro back in some odd kind of way like a spell or something that she only knows. Well im babbling now so just please update soon. your reader, jayray557
Edward's Personal Stalker 2008-08-06 ch 8,	abuseI.LOVE.IT. YAY! KEEP UPDATING OR FACE THE WRATH OF...OF...OF, WELL,...me, i think?Just update, please! I have to update too or some people will kill me.I had not updated for a week almost! Yikes!Thanx!
LoVe23 2008-08-05 ch 8,	abuseThis was so good...poor Kikyo...never thought I'd say that! :) can't wait to read more!
SubjectiveReality 2008-08-05 ch 1,	abuseYay! I knew story for me to read! This is a great start, I can't wait to continue. Well, I better get back to it now! --SubjectiveReality
PinkCatsy 2008-08-05 ch 8,	abuseI think there was a distinction. I also think you portrayed Kikyo very well. I liked it alot. Like I said, I love your story!
Just A Girl1550 2008-08-05 ch 8,	abuseOH MY GOSH! That is awesome! Please PLEASE write more... update fast! :)
nabikineum 2008-08-05 ch 8,	abuseYay! Another chapter! I got so behind, but I'm glad I caught up. Honestly, I think this chapter started out... less... I can't put my finger on it, but it was... awkward, maybe? Your authorial voice seemed self-conscious, I think. Maybe it was because you'd just made a format decision. I'm not a fan of first person, especially if it calls for POV changes, even if it is only 1 per chapter. I'm more a fan of Third Person Limite Omniscient ( http://en./wiki/Point_of_view_(literature) ) . It works a lot better for a situation like yours where you want to get inside of the heads of more than one character, albiet one at a time. The less you have to break narrative to /tell/ people what they need to 'get it' the better, IMHO. Please continue, and thank you for sharing with us.

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