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| AttheSwamp 2008-03-07 ch 1,  | abuseSee - told you so :) *Grins knowingly* You ARE good at this. All the way through this I kept wondering who the "She" was. You kept the suspense going really well and you are right - as long as you know you are valued it doesn't matter if you don't shout it from the roof tops. Great work Toodles! :-D |
| BananaXPancakes 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. Really excellent work, well done. :) ~Beth x |
| NickyK 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseVery well done! |
| EmyPink 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseAw, Jess, I loved it. I think you captured Cynthia's character very well. And I should have expected the Jibbs. *grins* Very nice, I love this style . . . I have used a style similar a couple of times. *hugs Jess* |
| alice 2008-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abusewow excelent. wow. |
| ImSoMMAD 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseBrilliantly subtle, well written, the repitition did work much better than I thought it might and the simplicity of it only made it more charming. Well done, and write again soon! xxStellaxx |
| Psycho Maddy 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseFirstly,I've always valued the ability to keep secrets myself.That's why I was so ** at Ducky when he told Hollis about Shannon and Kelly.Cynthia is probably the most powerful character there. I do agree with you, it is poetic.Especially this one:"This is why she doesn’t tell. She keeps her secrets to herself" |
| Mrs.Scott323 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! It's so.. mysterious. Yes, that's the best way to descibe it. It's like she's an all seeing eye. Observing, knowing but never judging. Perfect! |
| elflordsmistress 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseoh this was PERFECTION! really really REALLY well executed and the short phrasing worked wonderfully well very well done, my dear VERY WELL DONE! xx |
| aserene 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abusethat was awesome! I really liked it, liked it a lot! Great work! |
| Qoheleth 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseDear Miss-Margaret: Do I detect a slight note of insecurity in your author's note? I could be wrong, but it seems to me that someone who was really certain of the effectiveness of her style wouldn't need to preface a story with three lines of self-justification. Sincerely, Qoheleth |