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Reviews For: A Touch of Care

Gemina
2008-10-02
ch 1,
abuseThat's sweet!

Good job portraying the pairing!

Keep up the good work!
Ardans
2008-08-16
ch 1,
abuseAfter reading, I thought at first that I didn't like the idea of Diana being so submissive, but have to admit that the overall story was very, very sensual. In hindsight, there's nothing wrong with a strong woman responding to an equally strong male every now and then, and boy oh boy...is Bruce ever portrayed and the strong, sexy, and silent type in this story. Whew! I thinnk I need a cold shower. LOL
JoPoGirlsKickAss
2008-07-15
ch 1,
abuseLoved it
10/10 :)
LadyDusk -Raku- Not logged
2008-03-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseCharacters were done to a 'T'

^ ^ Very fitting and well written. Lovely Job
Hepburn
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseNicely done! You wrote Bruce and Diana well and I enjoyed reading it!
Grendle1853
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseGood thing Alfred stopped him, there might have been mental scars otherwise. Nice story.
pinklen98
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abusehaha. gotta love alfred
awesome oneshot! love it :D
almostinsane
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! Thanks so much for writing this! God bless!
Rhea Jediknight
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseThe ending made this one for me. I really enjoyed this little glimpse into their relationship, and of course I was glad to see them grow . . .closer.

Another good one!

Rhea
Browniesprite
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseVery nice. A little tension, a little warmth and a little romance at the end.

I particularly enjoyed the description of Diana's application of the bandages (lots of angst there!) and that brief moment where her hands linger a bit too long and Bruce pauses just briefly during his typing.

Excellent work.
Kipling Nori
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseMuy Excellente!

So, that was wonderfully written and very in character. I really enjoyed reading this, and it put a silly fan-girly smile on my face. :))
I understand stepping outside of ones typical pairing(s), but I'm certainly glad you went for it. You did Bruce and Diana justice (no pun intended lol).

And the ending with Alfred and Tim was too funny.

Thank you for the great read!
JamesTKent
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseVer-rr-ry nice. Where are you going with it?
Mark C
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseThis was a wonderful story, especially since this one isn't one of your usual fandoms that you write in. Bruce was his typical self in here. Plus, it's always nice to see Alfred. To me, it wouldn't be a Batman story without him. He always seems to know what Bruce needs even when Master Wayne doesn't know himself. This was why he let Diana in to see him.

I really enjoyed Diana here. This is the second fic I've read that you get to see her outside of her Wonder Woman persona, which is nice. Plus, she's the type of person who can stand up to Bruce's stubbornness particularly in this case since he didn't want anyone seeing him in his current condition. In the end, he let her stay and they got closer together which Bruce doesn't let many people get to be with him.

The ending was perfect. Alfred's line to Tim summoned things up nicely.

Great job.
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