its a fantastic story ever! i mean this kind of story is worth reading,its touching and kind of suspense that aroused my interest as a reader maybe because its a rare kind of story but theres one thing that disturbs me is kaya a girl? i mean shes obviosly a girl but your using him and he instead of she and her. hope i can read more of your story,i'll surely wait.

Look! I've made an account xD I'll upload my fanfiction soon ^^
I'm who told you about this story that it's perverted xD just like you, my Alex :$
But I liked it ^^ and I will correct its translation when I have time and desires of do it xD

bye-bye, and keep writing! ^^ (in english xD)