CRY! that was so good! please write more!! PLEASE!

I have learned to never piss you off in anyway I can think of, although that was awesome what you wrote to "Alyss". It made me giggle. Nice story by the way, sad but still cool. Good luck in future writing!

but that's so sad! they love each other!! (i'm in denial)

awesome ff! keep writing!

aw, so sad -tears-
luved it!

~e.h.~

why hasn't this wonderful oneshot gotten more reviews?! your writing is amazing! I actually cried a little, and that's no small feat! thank you for writing this, it's beautiful.

I loved it! I hope you do continue this story, I always wondered what would happen in Alice's love life after Seeing Redd. I liked the way you wrote with a similar type of angle as Frank Beddor, but added your own twist to it. I will be waiting for the day you write a second chapter. I'm not sure how to encourage you to write some more, however, I think many people want you to do so.

Dodge frustrates me so much!
Unresolved tension and angst is always hot though.
Great story, I enjoyed reading it a lot. :D

this is really good! you should keep it going!

I liked it. Even though I've never read the story, it was moving enough for me to understand it and appriceate it. (though it helps that it's based off a well known child's tale). :D Very cool
Til later readings

different from what i'm used to from you, not sure if it's because of the fandom, or if it's actually because you've decided to do something different. loved it, either way, and i'll be hopping down to the library to pick up a copy of this book.