Where to start?
First this was very unusual read and more strange is that you choose mpreg in my opinion it would be much better and 100% more realistic if in Harry’s place would be Hermione or other girl.
Second it was interesting choice to write about so crude abortion and I must say that you done it quite well.
Third I can picture Malfoy dreadfully well when he is disgusted by prospect to become father for ¼ mudblood twin boys. Just why then he sleeps with half-blood?
Fourth strange but I feel sorry for Harry, he is so pathetic, without his will and he loves and adores and needs wrong person while he hasn’t have any self respect. How he become like this? Why he despite everything still loves Draco? What broke Harry so much?
And at last if Harry betrayed Light side I understand that Dark side won, why then he is afraid that someone would attack him? Of course there should be many who wished him dead but wouldn’t they afraid of him and revenge what will follow?

OH MAI GAWDZ. THIS STORY MADE ME ** SEW HARD I COOLDNT WALK STR8. OH TINGLY :D

Ewy. that is just gross. gross but good

kind of creepy but definetly well written + I loved the flash back parts and the suspence about how any wizard would happily murder him. Quite surprised by the amount of... detail you put into this but it was kind of exciting because no one ever puts that much detail into such things (no, not because I'm a **. I just like stories that are unique) xD nice writting!

xD

um

How do i discribe this - wow um - i get where your coming from and what your trying to achieve, but the truth is i just barely skimed it, it is a little to morbid for me.

I know women use to do this back then, but knowing and reading about it in detail are two different things

Anyway from what i could read, it was well written and very discriptive

I have to admit that I just skimmed it. It's a bit harsh for my tastes. However, I'm sure that you didn't enjoy writing it either. I read the reviews so far and I think that some of them are misunderstanding what you're trying to express by it.

It's actually an historically accurate description of the lengths desperate women would go through before abortion was legalized. It's a horrible thing to read, see, let alone go through. But, it's a very brutal truth.

This is very similar to a scene in a movie I saw ages ago with Cher in it. I think the name is "If These Walls Could Talk" or something like that. I can't remember exactly what happened, but I think there was a woman in there that had done something like this and had bled to death in her kitchen.

O.O oh wow... that was so morbid but i couldnt stop reading

omg wtf lol

This is the first fic I've read in a couple years, and I have to say ... Haha, I have no idea!

I actually liked it. It was very morbid ... very creepy. My mouth was opened the entire time, and I was quite shocked throughout the piece. The only thing that threw me off was the "anus" thing. It might have been better just to say "I'm bleeding!"

Great work!

This si the mast twisted thing i've ever read. Nice

That was sick. Is it meant to be a twisted joke?

Is this supposed to be serious? Because the whole "help me my anus is bleeding" is from the rejected commercial by don hertzfeldt haha

Wtf?

Wow.Nice story.