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The Grim Reaper 2.0
2008-07-18
ch 12,
abuseAw thats so sad! Poor astrid! I hope Hiei kicks all their @$$ and then some! and removes body parts from the guys who cut off her wings! and as sad and awful the chapter was (Not awful writting what happened was awful.) You still get a bag or Oeros... ^_^ (Hands you a bag.)
Pyromanic Kittie
2008-07-02
ch 12,
abuseI like this one ^_^ keep updating it!
Quen
2008-06-29
ch 1, anon.
abusenot bad so far problem is i've never seen yu yu hakusho soo i'm already lost. But it was good i'll read farther.
MizuKaji
2008-06-29
ch 12,
abuseHello! Your story is really good. I mean really, really good. I really can't wait to see how it will play out. You made their relationship seem believable in such a short time of knowing each other. Wonderful work! *gives cookies* LOL
Kage Fuschichou
2008-06-21
ch 12,
abuseoh...i absolutely LOVE your story. it is very well written and the plot keeps twisting. please continue to update. thanks
Gesshoku2
2008-06-09
ch 12,
abuseHey you said you wanted 70 reviews so heres atleast one. I had been wating FOREVER for this chapter to come out now I have to wait for the next *tear*. Well anyway I love the story I wish I was that good. (people tell me all the time that I'm really good but I never belive them)
Vhee
2008-06-09
ch 12, anon.
abuseJust 2 Dream Of You

Ya my PSP won't let me log in so this'll be mah name anon.

GREAT JOB

AAH HIEI SANG

4 sum reason I hear his jap voice singing. I have the Yu Yu cds. Do U? Feel free 2 reply 2 mah email!

Update soon
Koori Youkai Hime
2008-06-08
ch 12,
abusewhat. the. crap. what a jerk, clipping her wings and sending her to ningenkai. gr... update soon please!!
Flocculate
2008-06-08
ch 12, anon.
abusefox

Another fabulous addition to your already spectacular works. Sorry, just felt like using a few grand words. Anyways, it was really good. I feel really bad for Astrid because it was like *woosh* clipped.

Thanks!

Flo
Shadowess 88
2008-06-07
ch 12,
abuseYou... you cut her wings off... You CUT her WINGS OFF!!?? OMFBBQG!! You need therapy woman!! *gives you half a cookie* You are so harsh! I would have ripped her feathers out!! At least they would have eventually grown back! Gr...
YusukiShredder
2008-06-07
ch 12,
abuseOMG! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! I'M MORE EAGER THAN USUALL! >,< And man, that's pretty eager. WHAT WILL HAPPEN?! Sorry, I just had some chocolate...

Oh! SO THAT'S why I got cookies, nya? Well Arigato, yourself! =^^=

But you WERE the one who wrote this, so cookies for you! :D -staples cookie box to George Washington painting and locks it in treasure chest whihc is thrown into the belly of a giant hippo- Wow! I wonder why I stapled the cookies to a painting of Geaorge Washington? lol Here yah go! Now go get them cookies Fox! XD -gives wet suit and cookie tracker- rofl

P.S. But seriously, work fast on the next hcapter. I must know what happens! >.
Unolai
2008-06-07
ch 12,
abuseAstrid got her wings clipped? Ouchy...O.O'

(Makes it rain cookies)
Flocculate
2008-05-19
ch 11, anon.
abuseMa chere, you have no worries about reviews because I looked just now and you had 61. But I will review because I believe this may just be one of my favorite stories. The plotline is tres original and I can't help but adore Astrid.

Please update soon.

Sincerely,

Flocculate

P.S. I do have one question. Are you going to continue the storyline up to where Yusuke and the gang appears? Because I think that would add an interesting twist to see how Hiei would act around Astrid and the rest of the gang.
JaganshiKenshin
2008-05-18
ch 11, anon.
abuseWhat's cookies, ehh, precious? ;)

I'd like to see some original song lyrics here!
The Grim Reaper 2.0
2008-05-14
ch 11,
abuseI hate the ending to this chapter it is too sad i hate sad! but nice writing skills but to sad of an ending! but here you go! (Gives you giant Cookie.)
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