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Pyromanic Kittie
2008-07-02
ch 12,
abuseI like this one ^_^ keep updating it!
Quen
2008-06-29
ch 1, anon.
abusenot bad so far problem is i've never seen yu yu hakusho soo i'm already lost. But it was good i'll read farther.
MizuKaji
2008-06-29
ch 12,
abuseHello! Your story is really good. I mean really, really good. I really can't wait to see how it will play out. You made their relationship seem believable in such a short time of knowing each other. Wonderful work! *gives cookies* LOL
Kage Fuschichou
2008-06-21
ch 12,
abuseoh...i absolutely LOVE your story. it is very well written and the plot keeps twisting. please continue to update. thanks
Gesshoku2
2008-06-09
ch 12,
abuseHey you said you wanted 70 reviews so heres atleast one. I had been wating FOREVER for this chapter to come out now I have to wait for the next *tear*. Well anyway I love the story I wish I was that good. (people tell me all the time that I'm really good but I never belive them)
Vhee
2008-06-09
ch 12, anon.
abuseJust 2 Dream Of You

Ya my PSP won't let me log in so this'll be mah name anon.

GREAT JOB

AAH HIEI SANG

4 sum reason I hear his jap voice singing. I have the Yu Yu cds. Do U? Feel free 2 reply 2 mah email!

Update soon
Koori Youkai Hime
2008-06-08
ch 12,
abusewhat. the. crap. what a jerk, clipping her wings and sending her to ningenkai. gr... update soon please!!
Flocculate
2008-06-08
ch 12, anon.
abusefox

Another fabulous addition to your already spectacular works. Sorry, just felt like using a few grand words. Anyways, it was really good. I feel really bad for Astrid because it was like *woosh* clipped.

Thanks!

Flo
Shadowess 88
2008-06-07
ch 12,
abuseYou... you cut her wings off... You CUT her WINGS OFF!!?? OMFBBQG!! You need therapy woman!! *gives you half a cookie* You are so harsh! I would have ripped her feathers out!! At least they would have eventually grown back! Gr...
YusukiShredder
2008-06-07
ch 12,
abuseOMG! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! I'M MORE EAGER THAN USUALL! >,< And man, that's pretty eager. WHAT WILL HAPPEN?! Sorry, I just had some chocolate...

Oh! SO THAT'S why I got cookies, nya? Well Arigato, yourself! =^^=

But you WERE the one who wrote this, so cookies for you! :D -staples cookie box to George Washington painting and locks it in treasure chest whihc is thrown into the belly of a giant hippo- Wow! I wonder why I stapled the cookies to a painting of Geaorge Washington? lol Here yah go! Now go get them cookies Fox! XD -gives wet suit and cookie tracker- rofl

P.S. But seriously, work fast on the next hcapter. I must know what happens! >.
Unolai
2008-06-07
ch 12,
abuseAstrid got her wings clipped? Ouchy...O.O'

(Makes it rain cookies)
Flocculate
2008-05-19
ch 11, anon.
abuseMa chere, you have no worries about reviews because I looked just now and you had 61. But I will review because I believe this may just be one of my favorite stories. The plotline is tres original and I can't help but adore Astrid.

Please update soon.

Sincerely,

Flocculate

P.S. I do have one question. Are you going to continue the storyline up to where Yusuke and the gang appears? Because I think that would add an interesting twist to see how Hiei would act around Astrid and the rest of the gang.
JaganshiKenshin
2008-05-18
ch 11, anon.
abuseWhat's cookies, ehh, precious? ;)

I'd like to see some original song lyrics here!
The Grim Reaper 2.0
2008-05-14
ch 11,
abuseI hate the ending to this chapter it is too sad i hate sad! but nice writing skills but to sad of an ending! but here you go! (Gives you giant Cookie.)
icemaster91
2008-05-13
ch 11,
abuseyay:) can i have a cookie?
your story is amazing very well thought out
me im trying im slowly getting the 2nd chapter done
very slowly trying to juggle school and work n stuff
if you ever get the chance look at mine please
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