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| Pyromanic Kittie 2008-07-02 ch 12, | abuseI like this one ^_^ keep updating it! |
| Quen 2008-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abusenot bad so far problem is i've never seen yu yu hakusho soo i'm already lost. But it was good i'll read farther. |
| MizuKaji 2008-06-29 ch 12, | abuseHello! Your story is really good. I mean really, really good. I really can't wait to see how it will play out. You made their relationship seem believable in such a short time of knowing each other. Wonderful work! *gives cookies* LOL |
| Kage Fuschichou 2008-06-21 ch 12, | abuseoh...i absolutely LOVE your story. it is very well written and the plot keeps twisting. please continue to update. thanks |
| Gesshoku2 2008-06-09 ch 12, | abuseHey you said you wanted 70 reviews so heres atleast one. I had been wating FOREVER for this chapter to come out now I have to wait for the next *tear*. Well anyway I love the story I wish I was that good. (people tell me all the time that I'm really good but I never belive them) |
| Vhee 2008-06-09 ch 12, anon. | abuseJust 2 Dream Of You Ya my PSP won't let me log in so this'll be mah name anon. GREAT JOB AAH HIEI SANG 4 sum reason I hear his jap voice singing. I have the Yu Yu cds. Do U? Feel free 2 reply 2 mah email! Update soon |
| Koori Youkai Hime 2008-06-08 ch 12, | abusewhat. the. crap. what a jerk, clipping her wings and sending her to ningenkai. gr... update soon please!! |
| Flocculate 2008-06-08 ch 12, anon. | abusefox Another fabulous addition to your already spectacular works. Sorry, just felt like using a few grand words. Anyways, it was really good. I feel really bad for Astrid because it was like *woosh* clipped. Thanks! Flo |
| Shadowess 88 2008-06-07 ch 12, | abuseYou... you cut her wings off... You CUT her WINGS OFF!!?? OMFBBQG!! You need therapy woman!! *gives you half a cookie* You are so harsh! I would have ripped her feathers out!! At least they would have eventually grown back! Gr... |
| YusukiShredder 2008-06-07 ch 12, | abuseOMG! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! I'M MORE EAGER THAN USUALL! >,< And man, that's pretty eager. WHAT WILL HAPPEN?! Sorry, I just had some chocolate... Oh! SO THAT'S why I got cookies, nya? Well Arigato, yourself! =^^= But you WERE the one who wrote this, so cookies for you! :D -staples cookie box to George Washington painting and locks it in treasure chest whihc is thrown into the belly of a giant hippo- Wow! I wonder why I stapled the cookies to a painting of Geaorge Washington? lol Here yah go! Now go get them cookies Fox! XD -gives wet suit and cookie tracker- rofl P.S. But seriously, work fast on the next hcapter. I must know what happens! >. |
| Unolai 2008-06-07 ch 12, | abuseAstrid got her wings clipped? Ouchy...O.O' (Makes it rain cookies) |
| Flocculate 2008-05-19 ch 11, anon. | abuseMa chere, you have no worries about reviews because I looked just now and you had 61. But I will review because I believe this may just be one of my favorite stories. The plotline is tres original and I can't help but adore Astrid. Please update soon. Sincerely, Flocculate P.S. I do have one question. Are you going to continue the storyline up to where Yusuke and the gang appears? Because I think that would add an interesting twist to see how Hiei would act around Astrid and the rest of the gang. |
| JaganshiKenshin 2008-05-18 ch 11, anon. | abuseWhat's cookies, ehh, precious? ;) I'd like to see some original song lyrics here! |
| The Grim Reaper 2.0 2008-05-14 ch 11, | abuseI hate the ending to this chapter it is too sad i hate sad! but nice writing skills but to sad of an ending! but here you go! (Gives you giant Cookie.) |
| icemaster91 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseyay:) can i have a cookie? your story is amazing very well thought out me im trying im slowly getting the 2nd chapter done very slowly trying to juggle school and work n stuff if you ever get the chance look at mine please |